Comments | caras_galadhon: FIC: Out of Mind (LotRPS)

caras_galadhon

FIC: Out of Mind (LotRPS)

Aug 25, 2006 16:38

Title: Out of Mind
Author: Galadriel (caras_galadhon)
Fandom: LotRPS
Pairing: Bean/?
Rating: G
Archive: Lothlorien, sons_of_gondor, and Green OpalsFeedback: Always appreciated ( Read more... )

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caras_galadhon August 31 2006, 23:41:47 UTC

Taking the tattoo off is very sad.
It is, and while it takes a couple sessions at least for it to disappear, I kind of wonder if anyone has ever taken a tat off and then put it back on.

Your language is exquisite though.
Thank you so much! *hugs*

telesilla August 26 2006, 03:20:25 UTC

Ouch. This is twisty-chest fic of the highest caliber; it really makes me hurt for both of them.

I mean that in a good way, mind you. I like twisty-chest fic.

caras_galadhon August 31 2006, 23:42:54 UTC

Thank you so much! That's high praise, and while I'm sorry it made you hurt, I'm also really thrilled it had the intended effect. Thanks!

archet August 26 2006, 05:18:53 UTC

Wow, just as razor sharp as the first. Paints a vivid picture of Sean's bone deep hurt, the lengths he'll go to to rid himself of the memory on his skin. If only he could in his heart. Somehow, though, I don't think he will. Powerful drabble! ;)

caras_galadhon August 31 2006, 23:45:03 UTC

Wow, just as razor sharp as the first.
Thank you so much! I'm glad they're working out well.

If only he could in his heart. Somehow, though, I don't think he will.
I'd be willing to lay odds he won't. *nod*

(And what an appropriate icon to use, too! ^_~) Thanks again!

elintirn August 26 2006, 09:08:55 UTC

Again, so sad yet excellent. You've managed to explain their entire history, whats happening now, and hint at the future within so few words, as well as clearly documenting Sean's pain and misery. It's commonly said, but you really have managed to pack so much detail into such a few words, and you've done it brilliantly.

caras_galadhon September 1 2006, 00:02:13 UTC

you really have managed to pack so much detail into such a few words, and you've done it brilliantly.
Thank you so much. I think the drabble form's always a good place to try and compress meaning, and I'm really pleased that it's worked for you here. Thanks again!

alex_quine August 26 2006, 09:39:21 UTC

It's a very potent symbolic gesture, 'trying' to remove the tattoo. Strong writing. Thanks for posting.

caras_galadhon September 1 2006, 00:10:04 UTC

It's a very potent symbolic gesture, 'trying' to remove the tattoo.
Thank you. It's a rather large gesture on its own in a RL situation, so I think it really lended itself to the fic. I'm glad it worked well in context! Thanks! ^_^