Comments | caramelxcoffee: One-shot: Lead The Way

caramelxcoffee

One-shot: Lead The Way

Jun 16, 2010 21:50

( The opening to the danger that was the outside world, and she was only inches from it. )

rating: pg, genre: romance, genre: au, one-shot, pairing: jessica/tiffany, fanfics

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caramelxcoffee June 18 2010, 03:12:44 UTC

Don't go into the light!~ ...Unless you see something cute and fluffy, then by all means, go ahead. xD

Lol, thnx for reading~ ♥

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caramelxcoffee June 18 2010, 22:01:08 UTC

Sadly, I don't. :( Well actually, I think I made one a LOOONNGGG time ago, so I could go scavenge. Other than that, I also have a Yahoo and Skype account. ^^

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harupi June 17 2010, 06:33:29 UTC

omg when i read this it was <3333
just wanted to let you know you're totally awesome
and i absolutely loved the idea behind this one shot :D
YOU ROCK!! XD

caramelxcoffee June 18 2010, 03:14:17 UTC

Aww, I'm not awesome~ /blush/

Glad you liked the one-shot, and thanks for reading! ^^

Judge no 6 Incoming.. Again :P snsdgo June 17 2010, 11:42:13 UTC

For the second time, Thank you for submitting and Congratulations for winning second place!

I don't really need to repeat my comments from before right? XD

(maybe I should, just for the hell of it! :P)

the story as usual was great.. but while I love the idea of the phobia, I disliked the reasoning fore it (Family death) cause it felt.. kinda clumsy and like you just put it in without emotion.

I ALSO DEMAND TAEYEON'S RETURN DARN IT T_T..

I hope you take my (mad) rant and improve on your story for future writing. If you take time and patience with future fics, without rushing, I'm sure you do even better next time

Re: Judge no 6 Incoming.. Again :P caramelxcoffee June 18 2010, 03:18:39 UTC

I am very grateful of your critique on my writing! ^^ I've never received criticism before, and so therefore, never had a good idea on what I should improve on in my writing.

I will definitely keep your words in mind as I write future fics!~

screwthisover June 17 2010, 15:37:41 UTC

LOL, well to be fair, it's easy to start well, because a beginning means something new, and everyone's always eager at the start. LOL I'm also the type who gets sloppier at the end because I like writing late at night and when it's already like 3 am, it's as if I'm just mumbling on senselessly.

Heading on to your story, that was really touching. I loved it. <3 There were times that I felt that Tiffany was being clingy, (but then again that's for Jessica to decide. Maybe my commitment phobia is just getting in the way. LOL) but then I slowly felt that she was just being like this because of her mom's absence. =/

Anyways, I hope you do continue to write. I'll continue to read. ^^

caramelxcoffee June 18 2010, 03:22:28 UTC

Lol glad someone understands how I feel. xD Yeah, for some reason, I have this thing going on where I'd prefer to write late at night, specifically 1 am in the morning. :P

Glad you liked the story, and thnx for reading~

WONDERFUL!!! cocokittystar June 17 2010, 21:35:17 UTC

*applause*
Now this is a fluffy fic. I love it. Love it love it LOVE IT!
I can understand why the judges gave you 2nd place :) It's perfectly JeTi in every way. It's soo awesome that I've saved it onto my computer in order to read it over and over again ^^ I hope that's alright with you though~
I love the whole plot of this one-shot. It makes sense in every way and it's most definitely written with love <3
Aigoo~ After reading this, I feel soo light and happy. lol and is it weird to be wishing that a situation like really would really happen to our dear JeTi? :P
I do hope you write more!^^ Congratulations on a well-deserved 2nd place!

Re: WONDERFUL!!! caramelxcoffee June 18 2010, 03:24:48 UTC

Ahaha, it's totally ok! It's actually very flattering. ^///^

Thanks for the comment, and thanks for reading!~ ♥