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caramelsilver December 1 2014, 21:46:48 UTC
Harry Potter, Draco Malfoy, not made for this

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silvr_dagger December 3 2014, 03:14:27 UTC
He was raised to know his place in the world, and always thought he did: at the top, looking down on all the rest with well-deserved condescension, as a wizard and a Pureblood ought. But sixth year finds him hiding in a disused privy, the hem of his robes sopping from overflowing toilet-water and the Dark Lord's first victim hovering without any particular judgment around his head, and the more he thinks about it, the more he realizes he knows nothing at all.

I can do this, he tells himself, I can, and he imagines himself doing it, and lifts his wand to practice the gesture he'll need - but the sneering smirk he tries to affect looks wrong in the mirror, and when he tries to mouth the words avada kedavra, the only thing that comes out is "I can't."

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silvr_dagger December 3 2014, 16:33:16 UTC
Thank you very much! Draco by the end of the series is a really fascinating character, so I'm very happy you liked his characterization here.

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caramelsilver December 4 2014, 12:43:01 UTC
This is wonderful, like really really wonderful! Especially the last line. Well done!

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silvr_dagger December 4 2014, 19:24:38 UTC
Thank you very much, I'm really glad you liked it!

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lizzie_marie_23 December 4 2014, 03:24:48 UTC
His hair is sleek and gorgeous and flawless but it should not be covering his entire body. He has always been good at wriggling his way out of things but that is no excuse for his spine to bend in so many places. Draco was made for greatness, not for life as an Incredible Bouncing Ferret.

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silvr_dagger December 4 2014, 03:27:57 UTC
Hah, perfect! Draco the ferret will never grow old.

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lizzie_marie_23 December 4 2014, 03:35:00 UTC
I'm glad you like it! your take on the prompt was also great and sharp and lovely, but I wanted to lighten the mood a little.

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silvr_dagger December 4 2014, 03:43:26 UTC
Oh, definitely. I'm not always great at writing lighthearted stuff but I love to read it. And I'm glad you liked my take on the prompt as well.

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caramelsilver December 4 2014, 12:43:47 UTC
Did not expect that! :P Brilliant, you are brilliant! :D

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lizzie_marie_23 December 5 2014, 01:17:11 UTC
Thanks! I was going to take the more serious route, but then I couldn't get the image out of my head so I just went with it.

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ayebydan February 7 2015, 23:22:56 UTC
Draco is given Harry after the Dark Lord breaks him. Draco has the reward but has no idea what to do. He tries but he does not understand and Harry's friend find him and take him away and the Lord falls and Draco cannot find himself to be against it.

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