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caramelsilver December 1 2014, 21:46:19 UTC
Narnia, Edmund, careless

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lizzie_marie_23 December 3 2014, 01:03:35 UTC
Edmund’s shoulders ache sometimes from how he used to swing swords with joyful abandon, but the muscles have never torn there. It is a phantom pain, but it is enough to scare him into taking better care of himself this time around.
Mostly better - for the first few months he takes up cigarettes to cultivate an image of himself as a laid-back fellow, but it’s nowhere near as good as the betel leaves of Calormene, so he stops.

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silvr_dagger December 3 2014, 18:20:42 UTC
Ooh, I like this a lot. A really interesting look at Edmund adjusting to leaving Narnia, and I like the glimpse of a more realistic side of Narnia.

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lizzie_marie_23 December 4 2014, 00:11:34 UTC
Thank you! Edmund is one of my faves

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caramelsilver December 4 2014, 12:42:00 UTC
I adore this! Escpecially the line about smoking to seem like a laid-back fellow! Brilliant!

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