Fic: Love In Seven Parts

[captainpookey]

Off topic, but I thought this comic was appropriate to add to this post, whether or not you read the fic.

Title: Love In Seven Parts
Prompt: A story chronicling Michael Corner’s love life for royalty25 at hp_wishes.
Characters/Pairing: Including but not limited to: Michael Corner, Terry Boot, Anthony Goldstein, Ginny Weasley, Cho Chang, Mandy Brocklehurst, Minerva

Comments

[peskywhistpaw]

DAPHNE! You went with Daphne! ♥ You already know I love this, but the parts with Daphne really did wrap it up effectively. And I was giggling throughout the whole thing. :D

[captainpookey]

:D I'm glad. I couldn't really think of who else to end it with.

[chimbomba]

“Next time I’m not helping you and-what the-Michael, is that your hand on my arse?”

“…I could’ve died?”

LOL!

I thoroughly enjoyed your Michael, he's such a boy. xD My favorite part was the one with Terry - holy crap I laughed so hard. :P And I love the way you seamlessly go from one person to another and how you tie it all together in the end.

[captainpookey]

Thanks!

I think my favorite bit to write was the bit with Terry. bwahaha. :P

Although, then again, I had fun writing all of them and when i think about it too hard I start to change my mind as to which was my "favorite". I think there were bits in all the segments I enjoyed.

[royalty25]

OMG I LOVE THIS!

Michael has to be the most ridiculous male ever. I loved how he called McGonagall "McGonny-gles". It made me laugh so much. Poor Terry! As great as it is to have Michael be in love with him, it appears to be a hazard. XD

Also Michael's interaction with Padma was awesome. I could picture him batting his eyes prettily at her as he said, “…I could’ve died?” I also connected this commented to “You know, I could fire you.” Michael likes this "could" word, doesn't he? LOL

Well done!

[captainpookey]

I'm so glad you liked it! :]

I'd have to say, Michael's definitely become one of my favorite characters to write. ♥

[writersblock76]

"...I could’ve died?"

*is ded*

Oh man, I laughed my ass off.

This was a lovely story. I also particularly liked the section with Terry. Daphne Greengrass wasn't something I expected, though it worked. I liked her spunk. I was actually half-expecting you to circle back to Lisa, but I also RP Lisa, so that could just be wishful thinking on my part. ;-)

[captainpookey]

Thanks! I'm glad. :) I had a lot of fun writing it.

I was tempted to circle back to Lisa, but decided not to. And I wanted to end it with a Slytherin, for some reason--maybe for a change of pace. I'm happy that it agreed with you though, because i wasn't sure how it would come across.

[writersblock76]

I think moving along to Daphne worked equally as well as circling would have, because this way the whole story was a progression from one girl to another to another, etc.

And I RP Daphne, too, so it's a win-win for me....

[suzanne78]

O.M.G!!!!

*smacks self*

I feel like a putz. I can't believe I never caught this story before. Michael/Daphne, and I just adore it. ADORE IT to squishy bits.

But more than that. Every part, every section with Michael was just awesome. I love how you write him. The Cho and Padma bits were inspired. AND TERRY!!! I love their friendship. But him and Daphne were utterly kinetic. They sparked, they sizzled. And loved Michael's proposal at the end.

I seriously bow to this story. Loved it beyond reason.

[captainpookey]

Oh, wow, thanks. :D I'm happy you enjoyed it! I really like writing Michael. haha