Wow, wow, wow! I've seen such an influx of Harry Potter crossovers lately, but this one has to be the most interesting conceptually. This would be the first time I've seen him written as a Slytherin, and I think it works well. I do feel so bad for him though - being bullied is horrible.
I've read a few of your stories from a few months or so ago and this one shows the massive improvement in your writing. I'm not saying that you were bad back then, but you've gone from good to something better. Be proud of your achievements - I can only hope that such rapid improvement continues!
Oh, I love this! Certainly the most interesting HP crossover, yet, since this is the first time I've ever seen John portrayed as a Slytherin. At first, it doesn't seem to fit but then you think about it and you realize that, yes, it's actually brilliant! Never thought about the Caduceus staff in relation to Slytherin before; now John will always be Slytherin for me. More please!
"Snakes! Why does it always have to be snakes?" Sorry, I could not resist! I wanted to emphasise the fact that Slytherin House is not necessarily evil, and putting a good kid like John there, with valid reasoning was a lot of fun.
Thank you! I would like to maintain people's interest in these stories. The newest one, How to Train Your Broomstick, has just been posted. I hope you like it!
This is really charming. A very original take, with John in Slytherin (and you actually made that make sense, my God!) and Sherlock a Durmstrang student. My heart goes out to itty bitty Johnny! He's so cute and beleaguered. I really hope there's some sort of continuation of this! I am intrigued by The Grim of the Baskervilles. I would very much like to see how that goes! Overall, excellent job and I can't wait to see more from you!
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I've read a few of your stories from a few months or so ago and this one shows the massive improvement in your writing. I'm not saying that you were bad back then, but you've gone from good to something better. Be proud of your achievements - I can only hope that such rapid improvement continues!
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(More is here! A new chapter, How to Train Your Broomstick, has just been posted. I hope you like it!
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The Grim is still coming!
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