Crush

[zsomeone]

Skwisgaar’s POV, takes place back when Toki first joined Dethklok
Warning: Things of the porn nature
Disclaimer: I do not own them, and all that stuff.
x-posted to i_hates_you

Comments

[imouto]

Wowie. ♥ I really loved this one. Skwisgaar trying to help, and then refusing to allow himself anything beyond that. Poor thing. And Toki's apprehension seemed really realistic.

Great work, as always!

[zsomeone]

Writing Skwisgaar with morals where sex is involved is always interesting. Thanks.

[herbailiwick]

THIS SEEMS SO FUCKING CANON. Awesome.

Also, this was my favorite line: he likes my fur blanket. I’ve created a monster.

I think I might memory this.

[zsomeone]

Wow, what a compliment! Thanks!

[misdreya]

First off, I love how you portrayed Magnus. I always love stories that give a little nod to him, especially in a respectable way

Second, I also love Toki Origins stories, so this was awesome for me, right off the bat.

There was just something about his innocence, willingness, the way he hesitated... it was maddening.

FFFFFF THIS IS EXACTLY WHAT I LOVE ABOUT TOKI/SKWISGAAR. You hit it. And then Skwisgaar guiding him through an orgasm and sharing alcohol in a kiss and.

Jeeeeesus. I love everything about this fic, thank you. <3

edit for word fail

[zsomeone]

I thought it would be interesting to make him the rhythm guitarist, people generally make him the lead. I'm inconsistant on him though, sometimes he has an accent and some fics he doesn't. (since there's no canon)

Man, I've got a fuckload of Toki origin fics. Wanna list?

Your enthusiam amuses and pleases me.

[herbailiwick]

I think I agree with this. I have a hard time seeing Skwisgaar play rhythm in anything except maybe his first band, but that would be way before Dethklok, I'd think.

[misdreya]

Man, I've got a fuckload of Toki origin fics. Wanna list?

yes? XD

[tikistitch]

*hugs story* THIS EXPLAINS SO MUCH!

And, Skwisgaar, you scamp, getting Toki drunk like that! :D

[zsomeone]

Hey, somebody had to do it! He kept running away!

[wikdsushi]

Oh, my. I can see this happening. Poor Toki for his background, and poor Skwisgaar for his crush.

I like that Skwisgaar is the one with the crush. Usually, it's the other way around, and, well, you know me and turning ideas on their ears.

[zsomeone]

Well if you haven't noticed, I tend to twist stuff too. I don't wanna tell the same old story that's been told before.

[wikdsushi]

Yep, that's one reason I like your stuff! It's new and different--like your BFTD story a few weeks ago.