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MICROCOSM RP'S JULY HMD MEME

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I actually think she could be a little more bitchy? I haven't stalked all of your threads, so I don't know what she's doing with other people, and she's not just indiscriminately bitchy and unfriendly so IDK. You could just keep doing what you're doing and it would be fine.

I can understand that problem, because she is just sort of sweet and ordinary on the surface, and those conversations and characters can be particularly hard to do. It's sort of like small talk? And I think it would help by providing some sort of context more to the scene. A lot of small talk I have with people comes from where we are, or what they're carrying, and just sort of making a remark about something in the setting and then things take off from there. I'm not sure how likely she would be to do that, but by adding things in you can provide context for people to talk about, and it won't seem so repetitive.

No, it makes total sense, and that's why I slow off/let threads go with my muses too. I definitely struggle with keeping character voices when I don't get regular canon updates with them in it to renew my interest, so...I usually just canon review to try to revive stuff? I just wasn't sure if you were aware of it, and since I struggle balancing multiple characters at times and making sure they get enough playtime, it's something I thought I'd point out.