Chapter Nine

[take_theride]

Good evening, city. I need you all to help explain something for me. I've acquired all of the information I can, and I've been rolling it over and over in my head since the weekend. It just doesn't make senseSo here we are in the "city". Many of us have been here for some time. Me, personally, about 5 months or so. I didn't really think it through

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permatext

[stealthvirus]

Until you point out specific problems, this is just a rant everyone's going to pay attention to for ten minutes and then forget about

Re: permatext

[take_theride]

I didn't point out specific problems already? Well excuse me.

But you're right. No one's going to remember anything I said today, which is one enormous fucking issue in this city. I'll do all that's humanly possible about it, and it still won't be enough. It's a vicious cycle.

Meanwhile since I started this shit earlier this month I still haven't seen the police force put out a "Now Hiring" sign.

[stealthvirus]

It's too wordy

Need to be direct and to the point or people shrug it off

[take_theride]

Thanks for the heads up then, man.

I'll make sure that the next audience I write to is the brain damaged. Or better yet: Five year olds.

[stealthvirus]

That's the best way to approach the network

[take_theride]

And today I learn a sad truth about this country.

[stealthvirus]

Just today?

[take_theride]

You learn something new everyday, man.

[stealthvirus]

I hope it wasn't that people claim they're revolutionaries when in reality they're lazy, apathetic, and too self-important to get anything done

[take_theride]

I've known that for a long, long time.

I've got plans for myself, though. I might not be able to fly or shoot lazers out of my eye sockets, but I'm not going to give anyone a fucking chance to say I'm no different.

[stealthvirus]

Good

To both points