fic, DSRK2, NaruRai, "Confidential"

[canis_m]

Waff for 7/7, although it is thematically unrelated to celestial happenings. I meant to write a case fic involving magpies ala The Birds but no dice.

Not much in the way of hanky panky, only GOOP GOOP GOOP you have been warned. p.s. I made Raidou talk too much.

NaruRai + cat, spoilers for DSRK and DSRK2 (final battle, Law ending).

Comments

[skitty_kitty]

Yay! Awesome fic, I love it, everybody's spot-on with their characterization (even if Raidou dared utter a word ;D).

I love all the goop and humor, thanks for sharing. <3

[canis_m]

Thanks! Am still feeling on wobbly ground with Raidou, or rather that my conception of him is WIP, so this is good to hear.

[flyby311]

gooooooooooooop. <3

Haha, you really didn't make Raidou talk all that much (u-unless you meant by having him talk at all).

[canis_m]

XD I did think about trying to swing it with no direct quotes from Raidou! No good, though.

[canis_m]

Added you back, and joined the comm--which I'd meant to do before and forgot, so thanks for the reminder. XD;

Thanks! Am glad you thought everybody sounded as they ought to.

Considering that you have already drawn NaruRai blowjobs I am not sure what more I could ask for in this life! but would not say no to delicious art :9

[canis_m]

This is excellent news.

Speaking of 4koma yaoi gags that should exist: N is going down on R, who has his hands in N's hair (because he would obvs) until R feels something odd concealed in the hair and starts pulling out objects of increasing implausibility and hilarity, beginning with a lock pick and ending with I don't even know. A giant robot.

[keelieinblack]

Eeeee, so adorable. These guys deserved some goop after that ending.

...also agreeing with everyone that Raidou's voice is v. well done! Beyond the initial small "!" moment it didn't feel wrong or intrusive at all.

[canis_m]

I figured that if I was exhausted after battle vs. Shinado--and all I did was sit there and press buttons--some recuperative goop was in order.

Big relief on the Raidou vocalization front. Am taking cues from the manga and thinking maybe as long as he doesn't talk a lot, and does so only in short sentences... XD;

rereading a thousand times fffffffffff

[motorbike]

"Dollface" ahahahaa. And the marriage proposal. N is so sexy in this. EASY DOES IT. I made a loud squealing type noise.

You make the best fic Kristin aghdlkfdslfds genius. This is totally what I wanted to read and you wrote it. I do not mind goop so long as it is introspective goop with gentlytouchings. Never stop.

[canis_m]

Our beautiful dreams are truly as one, then, because this is what I wanted to read also. Like, really bad. Dude I made a loud squealing type noise when I typed "Easy does it." Am not sure which is worse, loling at one's own jokes or squealing at one's own goop.

1 ridiculous pet name per fic is about the right amount I think.

Not stopping not stopping

[motorbike]

Nice that you cross-examine the Abaddon scene, because it is something that N and R might legitimately need to discuss, but best of all I love He had an inkling that he might like to be told and asked some of those things again sometime.

Agree with Amei that your Gouto is also the besssst. Now I want the one where he drowns his sorrows in cream and spends a whole day farting silently.

[canis_m]

I thought they should talk about it! Since R didn't really get to respond to most of that, in-game. They should probably talk more but everyone got distracted by neckrubs.

What I want is The Gouto Diaries, which would be exactly what it sounds like. And/or an advice column.