The Last Thing (Fushigi Yuugi Oni)

[candyfics]

Title: The Last Thing
Author: Candyland (candy__chan)
Fandom: Fushigi Yuugi Oni: Back into the book we go. Except now a lot of our old friends are ghosts.
Wordcount: 644
Taunt: My fandom is technically two parts. (I still suck at taunts.)

Comments

[transient_words]

I read this on the pit -- FFN, in other words -- and was surprised by the lack of reviews, but the fandom has mostly gone to the dogs, anyways. What I really liked about this one-shot is your writing style: you have a very clear and straightforward way of getting your point across. There is no of this endless blabbering on how much Houki is suffering, on how the worldhas gone to ashes etc... but you use a single line to express her pain. There are hints of it everywhere, but you keep it subtle and, like this, make it more believable. That, my dear, is excellent: not stating everything, but rather showing things is one of the important aspects in storytelling

[ran_mouri82]

No comment can compare with the above, so . . . ditto. Complete ditto on what this person said. Excepting I've never been an FY fan. ^^*

*glomps Candy-dandy*

[candyfics]

Thank you, hon~ It means a lot that you'd read it...when I know you're not into the series XD *huggles*

[candyfics]

Thank you so, so much~ I'm really at a loss for what to say in response to this ♥ I'm so glad that you liked it. And...wow, yeah, at a stupefied loss *hugstight*