would you leave and so cripple me

Aug 05, 2006 22:39

hey, look, it's everything left to be said about mark mulder and barry zito. fuckin' took me long enough.

then you still need to know where you are )

zito/harden, mulder/zito, mlb fic, mulder/chavez

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belle1446 August 6 2006, 07:16:41 UTC
Goddamn you.
So much for sleeping tonight. *sob*
Must. Read. Now.

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candle_beck August 6 2006, 18:50:33 UTC
yeah. you totally knew that was gonna happen.

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belle1446 August 7 2006, 02:30:00 UTC
But but but there was no warning! Just... wham. There's a story to read. And it's 94 pages long. *sob* I made it through 42 before my eyes demanded sleep. I'm getting too old for late nights of reading slash. :-/

*back to reading*

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rickenbacker August 6 2006, 12:27:27 UTC
You know, I mean this in the best way possible, but when you post M/Z I always get nauseous. With nerves and anticipiation and wondering how I'm going to see things when I come out of it.

Can't wait till I can devote the time to read this.

I'm getting ready to go see Mark pitch in Single-A today. I'm nervous about that too *lol*

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candle_beck August 6 2006, 18:36:23 UTC
oh my god, single-a? DUDE.

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rickenbacker August 7 2006, 12:36:35 UTC
Yus. First time in his life, right? It was the only minor league team at home in the area.

Swing of the Quad Cities

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gimme_proonz August 6 2006, 15:19:00 UTC
I'm dying inside to read the rest of this, but I'm just going to point out this one little thing first.

Mulder made him six times cooler, six times more likely to stumble over what he was trying to say, six times more willing to wake up early in the morning to go for pancakes
I don't know if it was intentional, but I love the allusion to "666" here. I love it, intentional or not.

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candle_beck August 6 2006, 18:36:53 UTC
totally unintentional! totally didn't even realize! you rock.

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heckraiser87 August 6 2006, 16:57:49 UTC
First: I fucking love all of your stories, and I'll be coming back to finish reading this one later today (right now I have Tigers' baseball to watch), but I have a question about one line.

“And, what?” Zito asked. “You’ll go back to Ann Arbor. I’ll go back to L.A. You’re a fucking dream I had once. Never see you again.”

Maybe I'm just really stupid and don't know much about Mulder, but when was he in Ann Arbor? I thought he went to State. /confused

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candle_beck August 6 2006, 18:33:43 UTC
what're you guys talking about? it says east lansing. *shifty eyes*

heh, thanks.

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heckraiser87 August 7 2006, 00:45:01 UTC
Of course it does. *pets*

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americanleaguer August 6 2006, 17:10:15 UTC
*polite cough*

“And, what?” Zito asked. “You’ll go back to Ann Arbor.

Ann Arbor is University of Michigan. Otherwise known as, the good school. Michigan State, variously known as Moo U, State, Fucking State, and Snort White Smoke Green, is East Lansing.

I only point it out because, being a Wolverine, it is a point of particular horror to be confused with State. :P

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candle_beck August 6 2006, 18:34:19 UTC
see above. fixed it like whoa. thanks.

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heckraiser87 August 7 2006, 00:44:19 UTC
You forgot "Cow College." *g*

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