lest i come and smite the earth with a curse

[candle_beck]

Comments

[your_byron]

Wow! That was...um...i don't know what to say...so intense, so painful and ....i was holding my breath several times. And i loved the details like the clock in Bobbys kitchen and the cutted car and...and...just everything.

Awesome! You made my day, really.

[your_byron]

öhm, gutted- not cutted. *lol* *is a little lightheaded from the story*

[candle_beck]

thanks! making days for people is my main goal.

[candle_beck]

heh, 'beautiful punch to the jaw' might be the best description i coulda hoped to elicit. thanks very much for reading.

[song_to_me]

Wow, that is great writing! My heart was in my throat for the whole scene at Bobby's -- great emotion, great tension, everything. I love how you wrote Dean's reactions and thoughts. And the ending? Perfect.

What an amazing story, thanks so much for posting it!

[candle_beck]

no problem, man. really glad you liked it, thanks for the note.

[candle_beck]

hee, thanks. it's a pretty big world, you know, so it means a lot.

[candle_beck]

thanks very much for reading, man.