Stay (David/Liz, PG-13)

[candisquill]

Posted for the numb3rs_het 2009 Summer Challenge: 14. Teammate, 25. Bedroom, 09. Pillow

Title: Stay
Characters/Pairings: David Sinclair/Liz Warner
Rating: PG-13 (a couple curse words and imagery)
Word Count: 1108
Summary: He needed to commit this vision to memory.
Spoilers: 5.14 Sneakerhead.
Author's Notes: I've been in a bit of a writing slump and signed up

Comments

[julietm]

Ai ai ai!! So lovely...and so heart-wrenching at the same time. You get where he's coming from and yet you want to scream out, "TELL HER!!"

Great stuff girlie!!

[mustangcandi]

Thank you again for reading this through and listening to me complain. I'm really glad you liked it. I wasn't sure about it but since you were - I had to share. :)

I wanted David to tell her too! He was supposed to actually - but he decided to be a better man and let her go. Silly boys. LOL.

[julietm]

*sighs

He's such a good man. We just don't get to see this side of him nearly enough. *hint *cough *poke

[mustangcandi]

haha. Believe me, I'm trying to write more David fic. I have several started, but you know how it is.

:)

YOU could give it a try too you know. David and the copy girl... LOL.

I think the fandom in general needs more David love. Come on!

[magisterequitum]

Ahhhh... Don't leave, Liz! How can you leave David lying in bed like that.

But I can totally respect David for not asking that of her. Such a good man.

[mustangcandi]

The good news is, I'm working on an N100 Rewind as a part 2 of this. :)

And David was going to ask her to stay, but like you said - he is a good man. He knew he had to let her go. *sighs*

I love them.

[ladygray99]

"Liz was the prettier vision, particularly after a long stake out when Colby needed to shave."
/snirk/
Great image that.

As for the rest, yes David take a deep breath and ask her to stay.

[mustangcandi]

YAY! I'm glad you liked the image comparison of Liz and Colby. I was hoping someone would think that was amusing. I certainly did. :)

Thanks so much for reading! I wish David had asked her to stay, but that's why there's a part 2 that hopefully will come together before another 4 months passes. YIKES.

[rodlox]

David David David, you do realize, don't you, that if you do ask, you both might end up miserable (though that's unlikely)....but if you don't ask, you'll both almost certainly be miserable?
:)

excellent fic to break the fast, to end the drought.
(and proof that it isn't just the Callie fics that you write full of - hotness? fire? ohmydeargodthatswow!)

bravo!!

[mustangcandi]

I'm so glad you read this and enjoyed it. I was really nervous after not writing for so long but I'm truly flattered that you used reference to Callie fic. *squishes you*

[elysium1996]

awwww my poor David

[mustangcandi]

Now, if I could just write the sequel to this... we'd be in business.

:)