Speaking assignment~

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Does it sound alright?

Its a school assignment for my Japanese class.

"Konnichiwa.Hajimemashite, dozo yoroshiku.
Serena desu.
Onamae wa nan desu ka?
Shusshin wa doko desu ka?
Watashi wa Washington shusshin desu.
Gold Bar ni sunde imasu.
Doko ni sunde imasu ka?
Shitsureishimasu."