Oh, wow, this is brilliant! Such a wonderfully delicious slow burn. I love how Peter's thoughts are slowly guiding him, sometimes subconsciously, to Neal. Very hot and beautiful sex scene between Peter and El. I've never had an OT3 before, but this is definitely it.
The images you've conjured here are perfectly in character all around, and the visuals--particularly of the sensual action--are striking, too. This in particular was very, very HOT:
"They're standing toe to toe, and Peter's not sure exactly why, but instead of saying "you're welcome" out loud, he leans forward a few inches and kisses Neal, mouthing the words against his lips."
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The images you've conjured here are perfectly in character all around, and the visuals--particularly of the sensual action--are striking, too. This in particular was very, very HOT:
"They're standing toe to toe, and Peter's not sure exactly why, but instead of saying "you're welcome" out loud, he leans forward a few inches and kisses Neal, mouthing the words against his lips."
Whew! *fans self* Wonderfully written!
*runs off to read second part*
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