Fanfic: Rudimentary Behavioral Psychology

[canadianiana]

Title: Rudimentary Behavioral Psychology
Author: Canadianiana
Spoilers: Assumes current knowledge, but I wrote this before I saw last night’s episode (3x13).
Ratings/warnings: PG-13, I think? I’m bad at ratings. There’s a teensy bit of swearing.
Summary: At dimensionallyt’s request: Britta suspects something about Jeff, and isn’t happy about it. Entirely Britta’s

Comments

[stephanierb]

Considering Britta isn't one of my favorite characters, I'm particularly fond of J/A fics from her POV. I like the idea of stories that observe J/A through the eyes of other characters in general, but for some reason, I really it when it's Britta. Maybe it's because I do like her, and given her history with Jeff, and her at times tense relationship with Annie, I like to get a look inside her head when it comes to a J/A relationship.

Love your story idea. Jeff and Britta shopping for toys for Baby Ben cracked me up. And Britta's mounting confusion and ire at Jeff's non-reaction to the flirting salesgirl was especially amusing.

And I love the brief looks at J/A here, especially at the party. You really nailed Jeff and Annie's relationship - the longing, the sweetness and the chemistry. I like the idea of these two gradually falling in love with each other, so it's nice to see a story where you see this shift in Jeff's behavior and know it's because of Annie.

Great characterizations. Great dialogue. I've loved every story you've given us, and I'm looking very forward to whatever you have for us next.

[canadianiana]

Wow, thanks so much! I feel like I've gone through the gamut of emotions when it comes to Britta; at different times I've loved her and been annoyed by her, but she's fun to write.

Oh, and I give all credit for my idea to the prompters. I would have nothing written if it weren't for all the wonderful prompts in this community!