Fanfic: Advanced Genealogy (1/4)

Jan 30, 2012 08:06


Title: Advanced Genealogy (chapter 1/4)
Author: Canadianiana
Spoilers: I don't think there's any, but we'll say up to the hiatus just to be sure.
Ratings/warnings: PG-13? A bit of swearing, nothing scandalous.
Summary: From a ficcy Friday prompt from tilie12, in which Jeff's mother shows up at Greendale unannounced, expecting to meet the girlfriend Jeff told ( Read more... )

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teruel_a_witch January 30 2012, 22:14:58 UTC


The way you write is just so engrossing and flows so effortlessly, and the way you write them I just kept Awww-ing and sighing and *happy sigh*-ing all the way through ♥
Sweetness and understanding and unbridled affection is when J/A are at my most favourite and it's how they trapped my heart in the first place (though I love their hot/angry/devious side almost just as much,still, this...just *happy sigh*)

He sighs across her ear.

His eyes are closed as Annie takes a step back from him
aasjgsdhsh ♥ it's just, the effect her kissing has on him, he always closes his eyes right away like it's the best feeling in the world, especially in that last other-timeline kiss, he literally looked like he was in heaven, for a lack of less cheesy metaphor. And your caring!Jeff, aww, my favourite, what he did for Annie here, it was kind of a boyfriend's job, it'd be harder to convince his Mom they are NOT dating than otherwise *gg* Of course, they could actually pull this off not because of how good they are at deception but because even though the relationship is fake, the feelings are very much real.Ugh, anyway, I'm rambling, your writing just gives me ~FEELINGS~ (I really loved your Earthquake-fic too, it literally turned me into a poodle of goo)

Can't wait for an update))

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canadianiana January 31 2012, 10:08:54 UTC
Haha, omg, I LOVE that gif. And thank you so, so much. I'm still new to writing fics, but you guys are always so encouraging!!! :D

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