STARGATE FANFIC: Lifted, Dreamless 2/4 (rated PG-13/Teen)

[campylobacter]

Lifted, Dreamless 2/4

Comments

[spacegypsy1]

Truly well done, great insight, some awesome lines and all knitted together perfectly. Anxious to read the rest! I'm so loving this Daniel and Vala love-fest. b

[campylobacter]

Am trying to get all my RL chores done and my fandom "work" to a stopping point so I can WRITE TEH PR0NZ.

Writing porn is not easy. That is, non-mock-worthy porn.

[lc59]

Very nicely and believably pieced together. Love the idea of the magnetic zipper...gotta remember that one.

[campylobacter]

Thanks! I figured a Kull warrior just can't just unzip a bodysuit as easily as a cheap whore -- they're all about the TECH!

[magnavox_23]

Oh this is so very well fleshed out - so to speak. :P I very much loved this idea of Vala finding and finally viewing this footage, it adds depth to Prometheus Unbound that allows for their relationship to grow given its beginnings.

[campylobacter]

Thanks!

I tried to give an unexpected point-of-view for this scene, because it's creepier if it's Daniel's PoV the moment he's undressing Vala, or CREEPIEST watching himself on video undressing her. ;D

[ami_ven]

Very nice! Having Vala watching the footage later really makes it a believable scene.

[campylobacter]

Thank you!

The self-voyeurism aspect intrigues me, not gonna lie!

[bkwurm1]

Well done. Felt very authentic, very Daniel. Loved Vala quickly zipping through encryptions. Such a natural talent. Lovely moment of respect and caring.

[campylobacter]

Thanks. :D

I've always been curious about that missing scene, so I decided to write it myself.