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[darkasthe]

Next round, apps are closed, etc etc.

HEY GUYS, here's the deal! I'm in and out for all of today, and when I'm in, I'm not in for that long! Here's a batch. Please vote in it when you have the time! I'll close it when I get the chance, and once I close it, I'll put my next one up immediately after so you guys don't have to wait too long for votins

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Re: Bakura Apper

[sisterskeeper]

Undoubtedly this comes very late and you won't see it. Oh well.

I barely remember watching YGO:the Abridged Series and I don't think I got up to the point where Bakura appeared. Too short an attention span. So honestly, I have no idea what he was like there, or what his voice is. I thought I'd get that out of the way first, just to explain my perspective.

That said, I also don't know anything about Dungeons and Dragons! Which. As you can imagine. Makes your app almost incomprehensible at times. What is a natural twenty? I didn't even know you had to do character sheets until your application. Your app is mostly based around DnD and probably is utterly hilarious to those who have played but ... I haven't. So I spent a lot of time going "I have absolutely no idea what is going on :(". It wasn't so much that I didn't know how your character would interact with other campers -- I got that pretty clearly through his actions -- but that I had no idea what he was saying.

For future attempts -- as I see that the YGO cast will beat you with sticks until you submit again -- maybe a more accessible application? I MAY BE IN THE MINORITY but I. I have no idea what was going on in your app outside of "he just got sucked into a game piece".