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IN for Lloyd and Argilla!
OUT for the others.
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brb will vote once I can type and stuff
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OKAY VOTED AS harukami, Ike and Arcuied were my only outs. Ask if you need any crit~
AHH OH MY GOD I FEEL SO TOTALLY NINJA'D omg sobsquee.
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I think you can totally revise and come back with something awesome, because this feels like you do have something! I liked getting to see that glimpse of her strategies and the way she thought through her job towards the end of the app. It just still needs some work. Good luck
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WHAT
WHAT IS THIS BLINDSIDING OF VIDEO GAME AWESOME?!
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Cielo and Lloyd are also IN. Cielo, one note is that I think you should cut down on the tildes. I REALIZE THIS IS IRONIC COMING FROM ME. But I don't think he does it much in canon, whereas you have several sentences in a row all tilding, which can get distracting, format-wise.
OUT for Ike, Jirobou, and Arcamacallit.
Feel free to ask for crit, but I'm going to be working on homework/SK for a while, so I may not get back to you right away.
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