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[recurrence]

Aaaaaand here's another batch! Don't forget to vote on any of the other open batches if you've got the time!

eta: Don't forget! If you offer to leave concrit and someone asks you for it, it'd be nice if you could leave some for the apper so they have an idea of what to do for a reapp if necessary

Comments

[alexander]

O SNAP Baccano! >DDD

VOTES

[persniktity]

abstain on sara, luck and aigis (I am so sorry I never got back to you aigis ;; it was late and I was sleepy and ;; idk). Poke me if you guys get borderline.

out to sousuke and ban.

Ban Apper

[alexander]

Concrit please? Any feedback would be much appreciated. Please?

Re: Ban Apper

[alexander]

RIGHT. For me the ending was really kind of... a let down? The rest of the app isn't bad at all but I did feel scattered after the middle or so and got to the end and felt all turned around. I'll sit on it a bit more though since I'm not entirely certain on my vote now |D

Re: Ban Apper

[alexander]

I was trying to focus on getting a strong voice in. The ending was suppose to show how Ban reacts when situations don't quite go his way. He loses his cool, getting you to like him style and goes back to just being plain Ban. I was trying for a new approach towards the app and showing how Ban's reaction toward the situation only deals with how camp affects him personally. Namely, giving him a chance to make money.

Re: Ban Apper

[alexander]

I was trying to focus on getting a strong voice in. The ending was suppose to show how Ban reacts when situations don't quite go his way. He loses his cool, getting you to like him style and goes back to just being plain Ban. I was trying for a new approach towards the app and showing how Ban's reaction toward the situation only deals with how camp affects him personally. Namely, giving him a chance to make money.

Thanks for the crit! :D

Re: Ban Apper

[alexander]

s-so sorry.

I got so nervous, I posted another comment here. Sorry. D: