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[recurrence]

--this was going to get posted last night, and then we all got horribly distracted, fdgjhdfg. m-my bad. LAST BATCH, next opening date will be announced soon.

Remember!
- Applicants, respond anonymously.
- If you're going to do the whole "ask me if I voted you out!" thing, please state who you voted out

Comments

[sillyrabitricks]

MORE NEGIMA GIRLS MUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA

Cheerleader~ ♥

[classprotector]

Misa was my in. Everyone else, ask for crit if you want.

[imgottapower]

Hey Misa you so fine~ you so fine you blow my mind hey Misa~ hey, hey, hey Misa~

... Yeah uh ONE IN h-hi Misa. I'll. Never do that again what.

[beautytopsthe]

...I wake up to Soren OMG HIIIIIIIIIIIII uh will vote later off to grab food.

Soren~~

[beautytopsthe]

Soren, darling, I'm sorry but I have to abstain

[kick_up_a_notch]

HASEO. CHOUJI. I LOVE YOU BOTH FOR APPING. But I had to vote you out.

Haseo: Your canon wasn't bad! It gave a good impression of the character. You didn't really need to mention cherry bombs but the strawberry bomb made me laugh. The sample post though, you really have a high amount of canon references, and that makes it hard to tell how a character is going to play in camp. I know it's tempting because that's what the character knows best, but it is usually looked down upon in apps. If you re-app, and I hope we don't kill your intentions of doing so, my strongest reccomendation would be to try your hardest not to refer to anything in canon, unless it's funny. But it has to be a 'funny' that someone not familiar with your canon would get. See I know that Sakisaka has a plant on his head, but most people will boggle at that with confusion. I've watched ROOTS and played the first game, so if you want to re-app and want a beta? You can hit me up at comicsan(@)gmail.com I'd be pretty harsh because I want you to get in,

[kick_up_a_notch]

Chouji: I don't have nearly as much to say to you. Mostly because I'm not as confident in my memory. I will say that for me at least, all the talk about eating people kind of killed the mood and wasn't too funny. (The mental image of Chouji biting down on a zombie is kind of funny though!) Another thing is I don't recall Chouji referring back to his dad like that in canon, which it would've been fine except you kept bringing it up. IF I'M WRONG ABOUT THIS CORRECT ME. I'll re-read the app.

However there was one paragraph I absolutely loved and could really hear Chouji: Akimichi Chouji, Konoha’s number one pleasantly plump ninja, is NO MAN’S MEAL. All the meat and insulation on my bones was hard-earned through countless bags of chips, and I like it all attached to me.

Please re-app! I'm no expert on Naruto canon though, it's just I really like Chouji as a character, otherwise I'd offer to beta for you as well.

Misa IN - all else abstain

[kick_up_a_notch]

Oh and yeah, Misa in, all else abstain.