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[recurrence]

Putting a batch up before I have to run out and look at an apartment, what.

Remember!
- Applicants, respond anonymously.
- If you're going to do the whole "ask me if I voted you out!" thing, please state who you voted out.
- No speculating about the identity of the applicants!

Now VOTE. Closed!

Comments

[askmymom]

o shi--

[askmymom]

HOKAY SO

IN for Kagura and Sasarai. In fact, Sasarai, this icon is for you.

OUT for Link. Assuming you're the same apper as last time, you're doing much better! I can hear more of a voice this time. However, there's still no real substance to the app.

ABSTAIN on the rest for lack of canon knowledge.

[veryshocking]

Actually, IN for Gohan, too. It made me laugh.

[sothewindblows]

WHY ARE YOU WORRIED HUGO

[anonymous]

I'm very sorry to have to make this post, as I am completley 100% certain that I checked the formatting on may app and had, in fact replaced all of the ellipsises to be correct, but for some reason they are not showing up properly. Please pardon the strange characters and mentally replace them with "..."

Hisa's Apper

[anonymous]

^ I'm Hisa.

Re: Hisa's Apper

[opalinesque]

I can see it just fine, maybe it's a 'your comp only' thing?

[rokudaimeyo]

Your computer topped you and you aren't even in camp yet. XD

[opalinesque]

GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN

YES MORE DBZ PEOPLE HOGOD PLZ. (WILL WHORE FOR TRUNKS AND/OR THE ANDROIDS :D)
Your app is a little jumpy tho. But. B-but the pillowbiter joke... *pht* *CRACKS UP*

Hope you get in so I kin MARRY YOU~

[blue_bombshell]

IN for everyone except Link and Hisaishi.

Kagura, I expecially like your app. GOOD WORK I LOOK FOWARD TO SEEING YOU IN CAMP IF YOU MAKE IT.

[blue_bombshell]

...especially. DAMN SPELLING/TYPOS.

Link Apper

[blue_bombshell]

Asking for Concrit

Re: Link Apper

[blue_bombshell]

Hi Link! What put me off your app was that I think that Link would react more to zombies and also that the middle seemed to be the only major joke. Try to make your app flow more, perhaps make it more IC... from what I remember of the manga, he wasn't so awkward.

[rocketsforgaia]

Out to Sasarai, Link, and Gohan (wibbled), all others in. Want crit?

Link Apper

[rocketsforgaia]

Concrit please.

Re: Link Apper

[rocketsforgaia]

It's kind of spazzy, and there's no real narrative flow or joke; I don't associate "long rambling stream-of-consciousness" with Link, so it struck me as a strange choice. Plus, you really don't need more than one limb-severing joke in one application. Overall I think it just needs to be more tightly written and edited (did you get a beta? If not, do so), and it'll be a lot better.

Gohan

[rocketsforgaia]

D-Do tell.