Righto, time for the usual early batch. By popular demand! Box woman is going to follow this up with another batch later on. As always, apps will be open until 6 AM EST. There's still plenty of time to write and submit one
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Re: Kouji apperon_targetNovember 4 2006, 03:31:19 UTC
Check your spelling better next time, and turn up the snooty. (The "americans" in small type won.) I...liked it but it wasn't quite there for me, and I'm sorry I can't give anything more clear than that.
Teddy, really strong beginning. I totally loved the camouflaging as a zombie bit you had. But the app (for me anyway) sort of fell flat afterwards; it felt just a little disjointed, with just a lot of random thoughts thrown in together.
Sure thing! The main thing, unfortunately, was pretty much the same issue I mentioned below with Teddy's app--this app just didn't get any solid laughs from me. I hate to just leave it at that, but it's a subjective thing and I'm honestly not sure how to crit for it in detail.
Y'know? I was having a pretty sucky day over all, but these apps all made me giggle outloud at least once. That's enough of a reason for me to give everything an IN.
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I should read the app, huh.
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Teddy out.
Alice in.
Kouji out.
Ogiue out.
Abstian on Saki, since I'm undecided.
Guy in.
Questions, comments concerns?
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But good luck anyway.
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All right actually reading stuff now 8Db
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