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Apr 26, 2006 20:12

PLEASE NOTE THAT SINCE I'M THE ONLY ONE TO BE REASONABLY CLOSE TO FINISHING KINGDOM HEARTS 2, I was the only mod reading these apps, durr hurr. Ergo, since I couldn't ask for Juri or Box Woman's opinions, there was no KH2 weeding. IN RETURN FOR MY AWESOME GENEROSITY... please help a mod outThis voting post is seperate from the rest in order to ( Read more... )

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officialbizness April 27 2006, 00:20:08 UTC
Roxas: Roxas? Is perfect. Anyone who says otherwise WILL MEET ME IN MORTAL KOMBAT.

Demyx: I'm abstaining on. For the record, I think the voice is a bit weak, but not bad at all.

Sora: Both had their good and their bad, but Sora Numero Uno has won my Disney princess heart. ♥ COME TO ME, YOU AWESOME RETARD.

Axel: Numero... threero is the best for me, and on top of having the voice down to a pat, it was able to best blend in Axel's "obvious" characteristics the most smoothly.

So in short, WILL THE ABOVE PLEASE COME GUMMI SHIPPING INTO MY PANTS.

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hentai_satsuki April 27 2006, 00:21:35 UTC
Tres.

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officialbizness April 27 2006, 00:22:37 UTC
Quiet.

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shinnanigans April 27 2006, 00:29:30 UTC
... is Gummi shipping Sora/Goofy/Donald?

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baptismbycuddle April 27 2006, 00:22:48 UTC
AXEL!! ♥~

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baptismbycuddle April 27 2006, 00:24:29 UTC
Okay voting YAY FIRST TIME UWAAAH.

Okay. Roxas, Demyx, Sora 1, Axel 3 in. I love you all.

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baptismbycuddle April 27 2006, 00:26:47 UTC
ALSO, SORA, I CLAIM YOU AS MY UNDERAGE HUSBAND. I'M SURE YOU'D LOOK GREAT IN A DRESS.

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Sora #1 baptismbycuddle April 27 2006, 01:30:41 UTC
Woah, how did I not see this.

That's very nice, ma'am, but dresses are for GIRLS. When I find Riku, I'll distract him enough for you, okay?

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jdiam April 27 2006, 00:23:06 UTC
Voted as ill_fllay_you, commenting with this journal because of 80s. Icons. 8D

Roxas in, Demyx out, Sora 1 in, Axel 3 in. :) Ask if you'd like. :)

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Axel #2 jdiam April 27 2006, 01:14:18 UTC
Okay, even I can tell Axel #3 blew my socks off. :) But do you have any critique in general?

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Re: Axel #2 jdiam April 27 2006, 01:24:28 UTC
Certainly! :)

It had a good voice and felt funny in parts (I have a basic understanding of KH but haven't played any of the three titles, so I can catch some canon jokes but don't really get the full effect of them) but it was more about your canon than the camp and that's a big put-off for me. Show us the character interacting with CFUD, not discussing canon events; remember, you're bringing the character to camp, exclusive of his canon. :)

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Re: Axel #2 jdiam April 27 2006, 01:27:08 UTC
Right. Yeah, I can see that now, looking back over it. Thanks!

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shinnanigans April 27 2006, 00:26:40 UTC
Roxas (In): Technically, I liked the way it was written -- it had a beginning with a problem and that problem was resolved by the end of the little mini-story, y'know? Toucan poetry and the reference to the springs (see, this is how you reference camp things properly -- you find something old and obscure and go "Wham! I know everything about camp!") provided humor, there was a strong voice, in.

Demyx (Out): Did you typo XIII as XII...? That wasn't the best start. The app, following that, was all froth and little substance.

Sora (First In): Sora 2, you suffered from the same problem as Demyx -- too much spazzing and not enough humorous content. By contrast, Sora 1 had a solidly constructed app and a more clear voice.

Axel (Third In): Axel 1, see the crit for Demyx and Sora 2. Axel 2 suffered from too much bitching and not enough humor, though it was more solidly constructed, and might have stood a chance if it weren't for Axel 3, which hit all the main criterion: voice, humor, construction. Axel 3 is Jesus on toast... not only that ( ... )

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Axel #3 shinnanigans April 27 2006, 00:31:02 UTC
What I want to know is what kind of jelly Roxas is.

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Axel #1 shinnanigans April 27 2006, 00:32:22 UTC
He's not any kind of jelly. He's jam. God, you suck at this game! D:

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Axel #3 shinnanigans April 27 2006, 00:33:24 UTC
Maybe he's that chocolate spread stuff. What is it. Nutela.

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fingeroflife April 27 2006, 00:28:59 UTC
All singles IN; IN for Sora 1 and Axel 3. (Not Sora 2 as I originally posted, sorry.) Crit is available on request, although I am a benighted and ignorant heathen and know not your canon.

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Demyx apper~ fingeroflife April 27 2006, 01:36:12 UTC
Canon can kiss my ass

Lay it on me~

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Re: Demyx apper~ fingeroflife April 27 2006, 01:38:47 UTC
OK. I voted you in (didn't I?) because you made me laugh and I got a good sense of the voice. Bad points, as I see them, are that it seems a little disjointed, and relies a bit too much on canon. Sorry I can't be more helpful. ^_^;

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*whore for concrit* fingeroflife April 27 2006, 01:49:57 UTC
... I have no idea, actually. Uhm. Demyx may possibly be illiterate.

But, thanks then XD;

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