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[skepticalities]

NEXT BATCH and it is . . . admittedly a bit of an odd one. As we said, small round is small, so we only have a couple counselor apps with a fair amount of camper apps left. So! This is a mixed batch - there are two counselor apps at the end of it. It's all good

Comments

[hakases]

My only out was Homura. Good luck to everyone though!

[comesquickly]

IN on the counselors, OUT on Homura, will vote on the rest in a bit.

[sistercomplex]

LOL StarScream and Captain, I love you.

Only out was Homura because I cannot see this type of destruction since Homura can sense witches. Marcy would not feel like a witch. Also, I have some concerns with the level of godmoding over camp's chief residents performed in this app. But my biggest problem is that Homura is not a silent character and this much action was not necessary to flesh her out. We only got two actual paragraphs of her voice and the voice in the narration was not Homura's, which was especially off-putting at the end. If you are going to go with narration style, it works best to keep the character's voice in it so we get both flavors of how you will play her. This is simply not Homura to me. I apologize since I love the character so I really want to see her shine in an app.

[artcrawling]

Homura was an out for reasons Setsuna gave. Everyone else in!

To be slightly more specific, my main issue was that as someone who is canon blind, I... really could not get behind this at all. There was really no sense of voice in this at all for me and so it left me pretty confused. You could have definitely done this without the action, I think.

[batburglar]

Setsuna said it best, my out was Homura. Everyone else in, and voted on this account!