Outs were Yousuke, Nathan, Death, and Renji #2. Nathan, you were a wibbled out, so I'm going to go back and reread your app later this evening, and I may flip my vote before voting closes. Unfortunately, I'm not so good with the concrit today. If I voted out, the app just didn't grab me, or something in it rubbed me the wrong way.
Clark? That was the first time in awhile I've voted in after the first line. Take me now.
Smallville kids in; a reluctant out for Yousuke (my mind can be changed, I'm the easily swayed type); in for Nathan, whom I think would be a joy at camp; out for Zatch; in for Death (let's be friends, baby); in for Renji number one. The voice charmed me in the end.
You could ask for constructive criticism, I guess--? But mostly it boils down to nothing really strongly appealing to me in the ones I voted out on. Alas.
Outs for Yousuke, the second Renji and abstain for Nathan as I've watched an episode of QaF over the weekend, hated it bitterly and don't want it to affect your voting.
Alrighty! Same apper as last round, I assume? It's a lot better, so go you! I see you've taken to heart the advice that Rikuou gave you in regards to apping a character who is the S.O. of another, and that's good. My problem was that other than the reliance of Momoko (and I'm willing to forgive that, given that, you know, I've seen worse reliances get in) was that I simply did not get the March reference. I'm from the southern hemisphere, and so a lot of jokes that make reference to months and seasons go right over my head. It might be utterly hilarious if you're from the northern hemisphere, but I didn't get it.
The formatting was kinda odd. It was a very ...spacey application for lack of a better word. Took up a lot of space for not a lot of content.
Yousuke tends to pick on Momoko relentlessly, even when helping her - he tells he that he can see her panties just so she'll talk to him again, for instance.
As for the March bit? Ah. Yes, in the northern hemisphere, summer camps wouldn't open until June or so, so it really would be a few months early.
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First off, I want the both of you to do me hard.
Second--yeah, I guess I should go do that voting thing now, eh.
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... Death, you had me at "sand people."
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In on the reread.
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Clark? That was the first time in awhile I've voted in after the first line. Take me now.
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You could ask for constructive criticism, I guess--? But mostly it boils down to nothing really strongly appealing to me in the ones I voted out on. Alas.
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In the meantime, RENJI GET IN HERE I WANT MY BITCH BOY.
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The formatting was kinda odd. It was a very ...spacey application for lack of a better word. Took up a lot of space for not a lot of content.
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As for the March bit? Ah. Yes, in the northern hemisphere, summer camps wouldn't open until June or so, so it really would be a few months early.
And eventually I will get it right. :P Thanks~.
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