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[recurrence]

MORE APPS. /o/

Remember!
- Applicants, respond anonymously.
- If you're going to do the whole "ask me why I voted you out!" thing, please state who you voted out.
- No speculating about the identity of the applicants!

Now VOTE. closed \o/

Comments

[halfcocked]

FAKE ALLEN WALKER!

[halfcocked]

Abstain on Flynn because there were a lot of grammatical errors and I AM A HORRIBLY BIASED PERSON AND FIND IT HARD TO GET PAST THAT but I also don't think it's fair to vote you out for it. XD I AM SORRY IT'S MY JOB

In for Yuri!

ROBIN I GAVE YOU A CONFIDENCE IN because I do hear a voice there! I think--you need more, really; see what Yousuke said about the "one half of a dialogue" thing. That can be hard to keep up, and so when you write an app in that style it usually ends up shorter and the voice ends up weaker (because it's a jumpier app by necessity). HOWEVER I could hear a voice and it sounds to me like you have a handle on her, so I am voting it in! If you need to reapp and you want a beta, I'd be happy to beta for you too! I didn't offer in the beta post because I'm canonblind and iirc you were looking for canon familiar, BUT I THINK YOU WOULD BE AMAZING IN THE GAME AND I URGE YOU TO REAPP IF NEEDED ♥Abstain on Shigeka because I'm not really getting anything out of it, which I know is HORRIBLE AND VAGUE CRIT XD But

Robin apper

[halfcocked]

Thanks, I might ask you to beta if I re-app.

[cancelingblades]

My out was Robin! Too much dependency on speaking to the other half and it was hard to follow what was going on with the responses to things. I couldn't gleam much of a voice from it, either.

[coulrofabulist]

Flynn, Robin and Shigeka out. The rest in!

You can ask for crit but I'm a bit distracted today, so I might have to get it to you late.

Robin apper

[coulrofabulist]

Hi, I'd love some crit about the app. (Although I think I can see where it went wrong now.)

Re: Robin apper

[alexander]

I'm a voter who likes a beginning to have either a strong voice or a joke. . . and yours didn't have either. The dependency on a one-way conversation made it hard to follow and in general I couldn't pin down a voice! If you would like another beta in the future, hit me up, if.june at gmail!

[helenesque]

Voted on the the Vesperia apps! Ins! Will come back to the rest later when my housemates are being less attention sapping.

[anoathforgotten]

Jubileeeeeeeee!

[fangirls]

Generation X-era Jubilee was my favorite. Rocked on with the app! Good luck!