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[haphazardace]

NEXT BATCH, tossin' this up before I run off to work.

Remember!
- Applicants, respond anonymously.
- If you're going to do the whole "ask me if I voted you out!" thing, please state who you voted out.
- No speculating about the identity of the applicants!

Now VOTE. CLOSED

Comments

[emogivesuwings]

ALL IN.

Note for Minagi! Your canon section told me nothing about your canon. A format that tends to work with canon sections is one paragraph to talk about your canon and one paragraph to talk about the character.

[threetimesmore]

IN for Korea so far.

I. I want to be from Korea now, what the hell. LOVING the 1984 REFERENCE TOO.

[norealboy]

Drive-by in for Korea because the 1984 reference killed me. Will get back to the others when I have more time <3

[norealboy]

Ok, In for Korea, Marisa, Max and Kakizaki.

Abstain on Kuroyuri and Minagi. There were some things that didn't sit right with me, but I have only slept 4 hours and doesn't trust my own judgement right now. If you ping me, I'll try to look over them again.

Kuroyuri

[norealboy]

May I poke you to look at mine again? If not, that's okay!

Re: Kuroyuri

[norealboy]

Ok, I reread it and I'm going to have to keep that as an abstain.

It seems people have already pointed out most of the problems with it already, but... mostly it's the fact that I don't feel like I can pick up the character's voice from the app, it feels pretty generic. Probably, because there ends up being a lot of repeats. I think it would also help if you focused more on what the character thought about the things than about describing them. A lot of the app seems focused on talking about what happens around the character and to me, it makes it seem a bit detached. I also don't think the app jives very well with the canon section. Some of the canon reliant things confused me too, even if you explained them, but I think that is because my brain isn't really working right now.

[hatesyouontop]

Abstaining on the Touhou app. The rest are all INs ♥

[poor_choices]

--Dude Max omg awesome.

Votin'!

[classprotector]

My outs were Kuroyuri and Minagi. All others in! Crit on request.

Kuroyuri applicant

[poor_choices]

May I ask for crit?

minagi

[poor_choices]

I'd love to hear any crit you have for me ♥