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[noooodley]

One more round after this SO VOTE!

Remember!
- Applicants, respond anonymously.
- If you're going to do the whole "ask me if I voted you out!" thing, please state who you voted out.
- No speculating about the identity of the applicants!

Now VOOOOOOOOTE :(. I LOVE YOU ALL closed an hour and a half later |D

Comments

[imgottapower]

FUCK YES KOENMA

I AM SO SORRY I FLAKED

I AM A GIANT FLAKEY ASSHOLE AND YOU SHOULD HIT ME WITH YOUR PACIFIER MAGIC KOENMAAAAAAAAA

[yuumama]

k so I HAVE COMPLETELY FORGOTTEN MY OWN VOTES (shocking, I know), BUT I DID IT AND IT WAS AMAZING AND I FELT A RUSH EVERY TIME I CLICKED THE BUTTON.

I completely blanked on app dates and I just... failed at beta and I suck and I KNOW I SUCK and I really, really want to apologize to you Koenma!! I DID NOT MEAN TO BE THIS FAIL. and yet I am and I can give you no real excuse. I. sobbbbb WHEN (!!!) YOU TRY AGAIN, note my awesome wording I know you will rock my every world WHEN!! I WILL BE BETTER AND I WILL REMIND MYSELF SOMEHOW. EVEN IF IT MEANS WRITING YOUR NAME ON MY HAND WITH SHARPIE.

Koenma Apper

[imgottapower]

Thank you! I got stuck with only one apper who only saw the first ep or two of the entire series... ;_; Please help me with the sample post!

Re: Koenma Apper

[haphazardace]

I got stuck with only one apper who only saw the first ep or two of the entire series

1) Did you mean "beta" instead of "apper" and 2) do you realize how rude that's coming off as?

[sistercomplex]

SHIROE!!!!!!

[starving_artist]

Abstaining on Koenma for the moment; I may go back and take another look later. All others IN!

[o_sarchasm]

My only out was Koenma! I. Really really really feel like he should be a counselor, for one, but the biggest issue I had was that the app was way too short, jerky, and conversational. If you want more crit, ask and I will do my best to not talk myself in circles!

[o_sarchasm]

How can I make him better? Besides listening to the only beta that actually replied to me that turned out to be totally canon-blind, I mean.

[o_sarchasm]

Well, first of all, I'd definitely flesh out the app. Maybe try making it more matter-of-fact, with the majority being calm!Koenma and then little chunks of hilarious spazzing to spice things up? With him freaking out the entire time, it's way too hard to follow. I think it's okay to have him talk about camp's logistics/DIRECTOR IS DOING IT WRONG AND BREAKING SPIRIT WORLD RULES or something, because he's the kind of character who KNOWS HIS STUFF. So it could be more of a "blah blah blah official business lady you're crazy" thing than a "OH GOD WHERE AM I". Remember, he's seen a lot of crazy shit in his day, and kind of knows how to deal with it (EVEN IF HE USUALLY SENDS YUUSUKE INSTEAD). So yeah! In general that's much easier to read.

If you're reapping, holla! I'm kung.fu.radio @ gmail.com and I'll do my best not to be a failbeta. :|b

[o_sarchasm]

Also, try to be a little more understanding. Lots of people are on hiatus right now, and offering to beta isn't like signing a contract in blood or anything. I know it sucks when nobody shows, but people get busy and these things happen. Don't take it personally!

Chloe Apper

[anonymous]

Don't apologize, it was totally my fault for being laaaate like a late thing. Thanks for loving my app~ ;_;

Re: Chloe Apper

[anonymous]

Go do it~ :Db Then we can sob together over SPOILERS.