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[recurrence]

HEY GUYS, since we got a lot more apps this time, I'm going ahead with the next batch! Please also vote on Biz's batch - note that while the polls in the batch itself are being funky, you can vote for that one right here. Thanks, LJ

Comments

[beautytopsthe]

Vaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan ♥

[esp_not_pms]

I'm easy today. All in with the second app in the dup.

[waaaaaaaaaaaarp]

Kaguya, what point in the series are you apping from?

[waaaaaaaaaaaarp]

Around Turn 16, I was thinking -- definitely before the whole ruh roh FLEIA deal. I'm sorry, is that okay?

[serialdrapist]

whup, dropping a comment. Most of the cast is from first season, but there's a couple of us from R2 (just Kallen and me). If you get in, would you mind contacting us so we can sit down and figure stuff out?

[euphiemisms]

In that case, this app needs to show the diplomacy, strength, seriousness, and maturity that Kaguya displays through the creation of the UN. As it is, the app is a bit one-dimensionally focused on the raburabu of the late first season and early second; it really needs to show Kaguya the strong-willed diplomat or... the app is really missing a key element of her character. I think you can rewrite this in a reapp (keep the raburabu down to half the app or so), but until then, I'll be voting out.

[ascendthethorns]

... n-ninja'd by another loli.

HI KAGUYA. ♥ Voting comes.. later.

[ascendthethorns]

All in minus Van and I went with Black Star #2.

Van apper

[ascendthethorns]

Would you mind telling me why?

Re: Van apper

[ascendthethorns]

I liked the first four paragraphs, though they were rather canon-reliant/canon-heavy; I haven't seen Escaflowne and was kinda "... bzuh?" as reading them. But the end is too abrupt and scattered, so you lost all that you had built. You have something! It just needs some.. tightening up.

[ocdeath]

BLACK STAAAAAAAR

... I am in the middle of voting, but commenting to say that I'm abstaining on the Black*Star apps. These are both really good, and I honestly cannot choose between them. You both did a really awesome job, and I wish we could just take both (AS MUCH AS THIS WOULD ICLY PAIN ME or not BLACK STAR IS SYMMETRICAL). ♥ Good luck to you both!

[serialdrapist]

Van was an out, all else in.

Kaguya, you were a confidence in. ♥ Yeahhh, there were bits in your canon that made me pause and it seems like you focused a lot on her ditzy/CUTE GIRL WHO LIKES BRINGING TERRORISTS TO WEDDINGS side in the app, but it sounds like you know that she's got this depth. If you don't manage to get in this time, I'd be more than happy to beta for you! She's one of my favorites from the series, and I'd love to see her in camp.

Van apper

[ocdeath]

Would you mind telling me why?

[girlsavesyou]

I kind of expected to get a name twin eventually --

However I did not expect it to be another man.

[on_a_parkbench]

OH OKAY right votes this time -
Abstain on Kaguya and Yuri for now, and in on everyone else (Black Star #2!)