THE END: disentangle

Nov 13, 2011 10:32

[ All the threads are visible. You can see them choking the affected, cutting into their skin. Some of them look heavy and wet... with an equally red liquid. Uh oh.

You can cut them and end this madness. Save them and make everything normal again. But be careful - some fated couples won't like you trying to break them apart. ]

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skepticalities November 13 2011, 19:54:24 UTC
[sort of half passed out on the floor of their hotel room, but boy are those threads definitely visible now - and they're everywhere, tangled and knotted in parts and cutting in.]

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fuckseptember November 13 2011, 19:56:07 UTC
[hi honey, I have scissors and I'm gonna try to cut that off]

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skepticalities November 13 2011, 19:59:34 UTC
[. . . screw you.

starts to stir as he approaches, groaning a bit.]

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fuckseptember November 13 2011, 20:01:09 UTC
[approaching faster, trying to get this done before he's fully awake]

Morning Lincoln. How are you feeling?

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flylittlepony November 13 2011, 20:10:40 UTC
[Off to the side in a barn, a couple ponies are lying cuddled together, amidst the tangled mess of threads and red stained hay.]

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coreofthematter November 13 2011, 20:20:36 UTC
[has her chin resting on Fluttershy's shoulder even though it's an awkward position for her thanks to the tangled threads. she looks concerned, but who knows what the reason for it is...]

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flylittlepony November 13 2011, 20:22:51 UTC
[don't mind me, just still holding you in a way to subtly ensure you don't get up without her.]

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coreofthematter November 13 2011, 20:30:33 UTC
[that's all right, there is absolutely no intention to do anything without you]

You doin' all right, sugarcube?

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tobethemiracle November 13 2011, 20:57:52 UTC
[sitting on the step outside his cabin, using a mirror to check the cuts on his arm. there are no strings. :)]

Wow. I don't even know how that worked.

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reach_within November 14 2011, 01:08:17 UTC
[coming back from the showers, hair still damp. he stops a few feet away, standing awkwardly.]

... That's not looking too hot.

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tobethemiracle November 14 2011, 01:20:13 UTC
I'm proud of it, in a way.

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reach_within November 14 2011, 01:24:28 UTC
[there's an awkward silence while he chooses his words, really not sure what to say to that]

Look, I'm gonna go clean up.

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actualizedname November 13 2011, 21:06:09 UTC
[he sure is sleeping in the cockpit of the nearest mecha. it may even be a broken rustbucket for all we know. NOT THAT HE CARES.]

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weaponvexed November 14 2011, 02:12:07 UTC
[there sure is a load of this red string around... there sure is a lot of it leading up to this giant robot thing.]

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actualizedname November 14 2011, 03:40:04 UTC
Who's there?

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weaponvexed November 14 2011, 08:23:42 UTC
Never mind that, what's all this string?

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needsahandjob November 13 2011, 21:14:28 UTC
[idek he's somewhere near Sofia. watching. :)]

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