[And once again, in the warm, cozy, Secret Volcano Base...]

Dec 10, 2007 22:05

Thank you for once again attending the ACROSS writing circle. I hope that the week since our last meeting has been a productive one for you, and that the progress on your NaNoWriMos has been fulfilling. I, for one, have had no difficulty meeting the quota, and I assume all of you are the same...

Who would like to share an excerpt with the group?

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outer_monologue December 11 2007, 06:05:29 UTC
Heil, Il Palazzo! - OH MY GOD! He remembered!

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ilpacock December 11 2007, 06:10:52 UTC
*perhaps, but he's having difficulty remembering who you are*

Good evening. Have you written anything of interest?

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outer_monologue December 11 2007, 06:13:01 UTC
Of course, Lord Il Palazzo! Where would you like me to start?

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ilpacock December 11 2007, 06:21:57 UTC
Wherever you like.

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outer_monologue December 11 2007, 06:45:41 UTC
Then, from the main heroine's first appearance!

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ilpacock December 11 2007, 07:13:38 UTC
That will be fine.

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outer_monologue December 11 2007, 07:59:10 UTC
All eyes in the room stopped as the young woman stepped into the busy office. The senior Detective BigStomach surveyed the new arrival with a scratch to his scruffy chin. Did the agency or whatever really think a young woman like this would be able to solve the horrible mystery of the reoccurring SomethingCurse? When he thought about how innocent the hair curls (drill shaped, such a rarity) around her head made him think only that he wanted to protect her. The image in his mind of a girl who looked like she should be on television as an idol wearing a professional-yet-still-feminine looking suit, and discussing case details with her was not easy to think about.

He briefed her on the details. She occasionally interrupted, asking for more detail or pointing out the occasional contradiction. After a minute or two of awkward talking, Detective BigStomach began to think himself... maybe she DID have what it took to crack this case.

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ilpacock December 11 2007, 08:06:21 UTC
A crime drama, then.

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outer_monologue December 11 2007, 08:09:31 UTC
There's a lot of inter and outer-government espionage as well, my Lord!

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latrine_orderly December 11 2007, 08:51:12 UTC
What's the main character's name?

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outer_monologue December 11 2007, 09:07:20 UTC
Gala Ell'! A nickname she goes by since apparently the curse can't affect people who don't use their real name! - I, Elgala, am SO SMART for thinking that all up by myself!

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latrine_orderly December 11 2007, 09:18:04 UTC
...

*UPSIDE THE HEAD*

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outer_monologue December 11 2007, 09:24:06 UTC
...what.

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latrine_orderly December 11 2007, 09:29:34 UTC
If you don't know I'm not going to tell you.

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outer_monologue December 11 2007, 09:30:31 UTC
Fine with me, Senior! - She's just jealous she couldn't think of a character so awesome!

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latrine_orderly December 11 2007, 06:13:45 UTC
Psst! D-did you finish your NaNo?

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