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Yeah, let's have somebody actually make it in this time, okay? XD
Remember:
- NON-PLAYERS CANNOT VOTE. Please don't make me have to check.
- READ THE CANON BIT.
Now VOTE.
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Remember:
- NON-PLAYERS CANNOT VOTE. Please don't make me have to check.
- READ THE CANON BIT.
Now VOTE.
( :# )
IN:
--Hana-chan. This seems a lot like the other one that we had a little bit ago, but more polished. I wonder if it's the same person? Either way, I still like the deadpan tone of this.
--Bob. So random. So bitter.
--Eij. This one amused me, though I know Prince of Tennis not at all. I like the line about hopefully being able to withstand multiple shotgun wounds by the end of camp.
--Phibrizzo. Much love for Phibrizzo. Tohru will totally be your 'nee-san if you get in. OMG plz dun eat her soul kthnx.
--Dib. I like that he came here willingly, and that he has an agenda. Plus, I got a nice sense of personality from him.
--Bart. I loved the complaint about zombies being too slow of an enemy.
--Ron. Again, got a nice sense of personality from this one and boys squealing (IC-ly) for their girlfriends to save them makes me grin.
OUT:
--Itachi. Almost, but not quite. The lackluster tone is good, but until Sasuke gets strong enough to kill him, Itachi really doesn't seem interested in him. I also echo the above comment that while I know what a Tsukiyomi is, many people won't.
--Didi. This is probably a case of Not-Knowing-the-Fandom-itis, but this one just didn't work for me. I liked the bit about knowing who the murderer is, though--nice way to play off canon, and since it was explained, I got it.
--Envy. OK, forgive me, but the rules of capitalization are not hard to follow. Capital letters occur at the beginnings of sentences, at the beginnings of proper nouns, and in acronyms such as BBC. They also occur in informal writing (such as on the internet) to emphasize a word or sentence, LIKE THIS, though you would (hopefully) never find them used in such a manner in professional writing. Some other grammar rules are more difficult to follow: misuse doesn't bother me too much unless it's incredibly glaring. If the player had started doing this while RPing, it also wouldn't have bothered me as much. However, in an application? No. No no no. And since I don't know Envy's characterization, that's all I have to go on.
Now I feel mean. Sorry, Envy-applier, you just activated one of my major pets peeves.
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