do not pass go.

[recurrence]

Yo-ho, have some apps. As a side note, those of you who sent in apps that were already formatted? You have my eternal love. As it is, I had to insert some bold and strike tags and make things work in LJ. Uh, hopefully, I got it all right.

Standard disclaimers apply. VOTE. Now closed!

EDIT: In case this wasn't clear, DO NOT VOTE IF YOU ARE NOT AN

Comments

[angelamourpeach]

The only ones I voted out on were Master Shake, Envy, and the second Kira.

While I think it would be fun to have a manwhore around camp (other than, yannow, the Seed characters we already have and Lu Xun :P) to chase the girls, I'm not feeling the love, Master Shake. It sounded a bit... spazzy? It jumped from place to place a bit and some of the lines I just could not fathom. You also need some better adjectives. :O If you reapp, which I encourage you to do, get a friend you trust to help you beta your app (or several, actually - s'what I did).

Envy: I was on the fence until the leg-bitten-off thing. Can we please stop having people have limbs eaten by the crocs, or at least slow down a bit? :O I know you didn't know about that when you apped (as it's only become really prominent in the last week or so), but that's a little... uhh... extreme for your introduction, isn't it? Also, the triple/quadruple spacing and really tiny paragraphs left me cold - if you reapp, try having fewer, longer paragraphs. Pick a couple and flesh them out, or combine some of them since a lot of them seemed to be in the same train of thought.

2nd Kira: There just wasn't a lot here, but I didn't understand half of what was there. O_o I'm totally not familiar with Seed at all, so the first half of that app just went right over my head. It also didn't seem like there was a lot to judge your portrayal of the character with, really.

All that being said: HEATHER! I LOVE YOU! If you don't get in this time, cut down on the detective jokes and reapp, because I want you in my cabin so you can figure out what's wrong with the windows. No one gets my Silent Hill jokes WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! Granted, they're only SH4 jokes, but maybe Heather would figure it out? :D

[angelamourpeach]

OMG THEY ARE SILENT HILL JOKES. I KNEW IT.

(carry on)

[angelamourpeach]

I'm going to have her buy a Saint Medallion from Carlos behind the Mess Hall, eventually. :D

I'M GLAD SOMEONE GOT IT! CHECK OUT MY SPECIAL NURSE OUTFIT I GOT FOR BEATING THE CAMP TWICE AND KEEPING MOMOKO ALIVE BOTH TIMES!

[angelamourpeach]

ARGH WHY IS THERE A GIANT HEAD IN THIS ROOM MAKING HORRIBLE NOISES (mommy)

...aaaaaaaaanyway.

[angelamourpeach]

Mommy? Where's Mommy? IT'S SO COLD OH GOD HE'S COMING IN! HOLD ME HENRY!

XD So much love.

[mcjunyi]

XUN ISN'T A MANWHORE ;o;

He's just... popular.

[angelamourpeach]

XD SHHH, I LOVE.

*laughing* It's like a sitcom: Everybody Loves Xun. ^^

[mcjunyi]

I know you love. ^_- But when the manwhore jokes fly, I know I've tipped the XUNCHARACTER scales a little too far in one direction.

[angelamourpeach]

Noooooo, I actually had to debate with myself whether to include him with the Seed characters or not - he doesn't actually go chasing anyone, they all just flock to him for no apparent reason. :O I'm mystified.

Xun is the camp's unwitting, unintentional pimp. :O

[mcjunyi]

It's the smell of innocence and raunchy pirates

[angelamourpeach]

*Amelia voice* Smells like... hot dogs! :D

[shinnanigans]

He was mine first. D:

[mcjunyi]

Then GIRLFRIEND, you'd best treat him right! *snap snap*

[shinnanigans]

OH NOES.

[angelamourpeach]

He doesn't love you! D:< That's why he's going home with me and our baby!

(Jerry! Jerry! Jerry!)

[mcjunyi]

Hahaha "THAT GOAT DOESN'T LOVE YOU!"