do not pass go.

[recurrence]

Yo-ho, have some apps. As a side note, those of you who sent in apps that were already formatted? You have my eternal love. As it is, I had to insert some bold and strike tags and make things work in LJ. Uh, hopefully, I got it all right.

Standard disclaimers apply. VOTE. Now closed!

EDIT: In case this wasn't clear, DO NOT VOTE IF YOU ARE NOT AN

Comments

[harukami]

Usopp: I like the concept (Usopp lying like a rug to get help) but I feel you could have expanded the lies to be more exaggerated and absurd. I haven't seen much OP, but it didn't 'feel' like the Usopp I know. Sorry, re-app, but out.

Azuma Kazuma: Maybe I'm picky today, but ...nothing really stood out for me. Hardly any mention of the camp beyond zombies and the location, and I just feel more could be done with the app. That and formatting killed it for me. Out.

Makie: Hee. Don't know the character, but seemed to fit with the canon and made me grin. In!

Heather: Oh, jeez, I'm torn on this one. On the one hand, it doesn't seem to have the worn-down, "okay what the shit is it this time" feel of Heather at the end of the game, on the other... damn, this is a PERFECT place for heather, and the pipe line made me grin, so I'm voting In, but maybe keep some of that in mind for critique if you get in.

Molly: D'aww! Molly! In!

Shake: Maybe it's just me not knowing the series, but I found this sorta... teenage guy who likes chicks, okay whatever. Sorry, nothing really stood out. Out.

Envy: Ah, I'll admit off the bat that I'm picky about FMA characterization, but this Envy seemed to skim off the surface of what Envy represented in the series and not really delve into the deeper broken *twistedness* of his approach. Also... Envy isn't actually,er, that much of a torturer; most of the time he just seems to get the job done, but has giant daddy issues and Edward, to him... well, sorry, I'll stop before I start a character essay and just say that this didn't read to me as Envy, at any rate. ^^; Sorry, I'm a picky picky person and good luck with the other voters instead. :D; Out.

Kira 1: Hee! Cracked me up. Like Athrun but with EXTRA SUPER ANGST! In!

Kira 2: Mmm, you started to lose me when you piled on the acronyms in the beginning; if there's a lot of series-specific terms, you might want to include them in the canon section. That combined with an app that didn't stand out too much lead me to an out.

[emo_conflict]

HEY. NO ONE CAN DEFEAT ATHRUN IN SUPERANGST. D< !!!

[harukami]

The real Athrun vs Kira BATTLE FOR TEH AGES!

[shinnanigans]

Been there, done that. Twice.

Athrun lost last time.

[emo_conflict]

STFU.

[shinnanigans]

It's okay, you can stick him in the sand and hit Kira over the head with the red bat of Infinite Justice soon.

[harukami]

...but maybe keep some of that in mind for critique if you get in.

I will, thanks!

Part of the problem is probably that I replayed the game to give myself a character refresher, but I wrote the app when I'd just played through the first couple of areas, so early-"I just need to get home ASAP and everything'll be all right, really"-her, before she got worn down by the constant barrage of horror, was at the forefront of my mind while doing so.

[harukami]

Ah, yeah! That makes sense, rereading the app. Cool. <3