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Special (10/?)

Apr 19, 2009 23:09

Title: Special (10/?)
Summary: All over the world, people are waking up with extraordinary abilities. Not knowing how they got them or what to do, they will soon discover that they are not alone. They are all connected. They are all special. Based on NBC’s Heroes. Various Pairings.

Links to previous chapters inside.

( He was getting sick of all this prophetic talk. Couldn’t anyone just be straightforward anymore? )

author: btp248, fanfic

Comments 6

emiliglia April 20 2009, 05:05:33 UTC

Gah! Another great chapter!

My heart broke when George realized his son was taken... Is Winters going to go against the Company? I can't see him separating families like that now that he knows they did it with him and Babe. Still trying to figure out Winters's power! And if maybe it could help Nix? (Might be wishful thinking on my part. :P)

Speirs's power is just so perfectly him. I think him and Lipton would have an amusing relationship because Speirs could get the truth out of Lip and then Lip could get it through Speirs's thoughts.

Just so! good! Can't wait for the next part!

btp248 April 20 2009, 21:19:50 UTC

Why thank you :)

I know-poor Luz right? And Winters has a lot of shades to him so you never know. I'm trying to tactifully integrate his power into the story :)

And Speirs has more going on then meets the eye. Glad you liked it!

12fingerdarm April 22 2009, 11:29:22 UTC

Yay, a new chapter! A great chapter.

Your Webgott is fantastic. But I also could see a little thing between Webster/Roe :D

Anyway, the whole story is very well written. And I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

btp248 April 23 2009, 22:24:02 UTC

Thanks :) I LOVE Webgott so I'm glad you're enjoying that. I'm always writing subtext between multiple characters so who knows?

Also I'm glad you feel it's well written- because it's so long I'm prone to a lot of mistakes.

evo_spider April 22 2009, 20:54:22 UTC

This chapter was awesome and I thoroughly enjoyed the fact that it was long. You've really set up an interesting plot twist by having Webster saving Gene and having Eli taken by the company. To be honest, I got to the point where I had to write down where everyone was in order to keep up! ^_^ I think this chapter was definitely filled with the spirit of the Heroes plot style and yet still with the personalities of the Band of Brothers characters. One of the things I'm enjoying the most is that the characters are moving rapidly towards a central focal point and I must admit that I'm a bit on the edge of my seat to know where you will take them all.

Don't get me wrong, but I'm pleased to know that you have a planned ending for this fic since it would be a shame to not finish it.

btp248 April 23 2009, 22:20:42 UTC

Wow- I'm glad you feel it's living up to the Heroes plot style (first season I hope!) Yeah there are a lot of things going on that's why I always try to tell people who is where and with whom throughout the story. I'm so happy you're enjoying it :)