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"He raised his head to gaze down at her; her dark hair rivulet-loose, desire pooled in her eyes, lips parted, toffee skin glowing, the outline of her breasts and hips maddening him with their soft swelling curves. Arthur wanted her so badly it hurt. He wanted to see her panting and unravelling beneath his touch, all her secrets spilled against him
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I'm really enjoying this story. I love the chemistry between Arthur and Gwen. It's so palpable. I almost wonder if their strong physical yearnings for one another go beyond simply an instant soul-mate connection but is related to some pre-ordained destiny that says they must mate and produce an heir at a certain point and time in history.
Morgana's situation is sad and creepy. I feel for her so much because she didn't ask for what's happening to her (at least as far as we know) and yet here it is. She is being used for some dark plan that will likely lead to the destruction of herself and maybe even the ones she loves.
The blond woman who I'm betting is Morgause who keeps appearing in the shadows is downright scary. I think you've done a wonderful job conveying the terrifying mystic and the dangerously unstable enviroment in which these characters live. I honestly fear for them all.
Anyway, this is a great story. I am very excited to read more.
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