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Expectations vs Reality

Jan 19, 2016 18:18

Author: dreammaidenn
Title: Expectations vs Reality
Rating: G
Pairing/s: Arthur/Merlin
Character/s: Merlin, Arthur
Summary: Merlin finds out that reality is never quite what you expect, especially when you're on a car ride with Arthur.
Warnings: None
Word Count: 503
Prompt: #194 Expectation
Author's Notes: Part 3 of my Lab Coats & Scrubs ‘verse which you ( Read more... )

*c:dreammaidenn, c:merlin, rating:g, p:arthur/merlin, rating:pg, pt 194:expectation, type:drabble, c:arthur

Comments 13

archaeologist_d January 20 2016, 02:48:56 UTC

I liked how neither of them would say anything but it was all unspoken tension.

little_huntress January 20 2016, 03:35:56 UTC

Thank you! :D

emrys_mk January 20 2016, 03:58:24 UTC

Poor Merlin. Arthur will hopefully come around.

little_huntress January 20 2016, 04:06:54 UTC

I think he just needs a push towards Merlin ;)

ajsrandom January 20 2016, 17:48:30 UTC

Aw, poor Merlin! I have definitely been in that position before.

little_huntress January 20 2016, 23:07:53 UTC

It sucks, but hopefully Arthur soon realizes he's being a bit blind.

brunettepet January 20 2016, 19:25:42 UTC

You built nice tension in Merlin being hyper aware of the silence between them. Knowing Arthur was watching him may make Merlin braver next time.

little_huntress January 20 2016, 23:08:55 UTC

Thank you. Let's hope he is, and that Arthur realizes Merlin is right there :)

emrys_mk January 20 2016, 22:41:04 UTC

Poor Merlin. He just needs to keep trying.

emrys_mk January 20 2016, 22:41:43 UTC

Lol I liked it so much I commented twice lol!

little_huntress January 20 2016, 23:05:24 UTC

Hahahahah yay!