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Jul 18, 2015 23:47

I’m here.

Arthur knew it already, had felt the intrusion. He was used to it now. He was strong. He’d held out so far. He could hold out again. This wasn’t forever. Emrys would come for him. Arthur could stand it. He could.

You know how this goes, Arthur.

Yes, he knew. There would be the question, the same one, over and over. There was no need to ( Read more... )

c:merlin, pt 169:i'm here, p:arthur/merlin, rating:pg, type:drabble, c:morgana, c:arthur, *c:clea2011

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avidrosette July 18 2015, 23:04:26 UTC
Wonderful! This is so suspenseful and tense. You leave me wishing to see the implied next scene.

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clea2011 July 20 2015, 22:06:09 UTC
Thanks :D (I don't think Morgana would enjoy the next scene much.)

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adsullatta July 19 2015, 00:02:02 UTC
You are SO DAMNED GOOD!! This was written masterfully, the slow build of the torture and the break at the end...perfect.

Poor Arthur ;_;

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clea2011 July 20 2015, 22:07:24 UTC
Aw, thanks for the kind comment. I think I have a bit of a thing for Arthur whump... :D

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5leggedcricket July 19 2015, 00:17:36 UTC
oh my god.. This is brilliant, absolutely brilliant. You seem to build a whole universe with so little words. Also Bamf!Merlin ftw.

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clea2011 July 20 2015, 22:41:37 UTC
Thank you, glad you enjoyed it. The world needs more Bamf!Merlin, I think :D

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preciousarthur July 19 2015, 00:51:34 UTC
That was amazing! It was so intense, and then Merlin at the end... Wow!

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clea2011 July 20 2015, 22:41:54 UTC
Thank you, glad you liked it :D

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thismaz July 19 2015, 09:17:54 UTC
Merlin to the rescue, just in time. Nice.
And I really liked the way you bookended the story with the same greeting; one so much more welcome than the other.

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clea2011 July 20 2015, 22:42:32 UTC
Thanks, the bookending was the first thing I thought of, then the rest fell in around it. :)

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