Ghosts (Part 3)

[amarie_authiel]

Author: amarie_authiel
Title: Ghosts
Rating: G
Pairing/s: Arthur/Gwen (yeah I can hardly believe it myself!)
Character/s: Arthur, Gwen, The great dragon. Others mentioned.
Summary: Gwen and Arthur sneaks off to get away from it all, but the ghosts follow them.
Warnings:
Word Count: ~390
Prompt:#162 Picnic in the sun.
Author's Notes: Not too sure what i think

Comments

[brunettepet]

I love that Merlin and Gaius aren't letting people forget what they've done. Gaius keeping Merlin's box of bones on display to make people remember what they've done is quite wonderful and so was Kilgarrah goading Arthur and Gwen. These two are lucky Merlin's still out there or they might have been the picnic that afternoon.

This made me laugh: The ghost in the Prince Regent's room leaves dead woodworms in the drinking glass by the bedside. It's pointed and petty and totally Merlin.

[amarie_authiel]

*grins* Thank you. I like the idea of keeping them on their toes, making them squirm a bit.

[gilli_ann]

I really liked this. It's got a perfect, eerie mood.

[amarie_authiel]

I'm thrilled you think so. :)

[ajsrandom]

I agree with brunettepet- funny yet haunting. He's dead, or is he? And no one presses for clues. I love Kilgharrah's taunting too. :)

[amarie_authiel]

Aww, thank you.
Kil would want some part of the fun too, he does so love to play games.

[archaeologist_d]

I love that Kil is taunting Arthur. After all, he thinks he killed Merlin and he deserves everything he gets!

[amarie_authiel]

Thank you :) I think Kil would have quite a lot to say about that. Some spooky riddles to keep them up at night is a good start.