Mistake

[bunnysworld]

Author: bunnysworld
Title: Mistake
Rating: PG
Pairing(s): Merlin/Arthur
Summary: Merlin made a mistake. But was it so bad after all?
Warnings: none
Word Count: 860
Prompt: mistake
Author's Notes: Thanks issy5209 for the beta!

Comments

[kiromenanz]

I loved this, especially the distinction between treating sex as a sport and treating sex as a way to be intimate with a special someone. And I really liked Arthur being considerate and valuing Merlin for that, I hope they're really happy together ;)

Only one thing (and this might be just my personal taste) but I didn't quite like your use of P.S. It made the ending of the fic feel abrupt for me. I think you could just have put the final sentences at the end without the post scriptum or put it in brackets/parentheses. But that may just be my personal opinion.

Anyway, well done :)

[bunnysworld]

Oh, they will be. Glad you like it! Thanks!

[brunettepet]

I really like that Arthur sees Merlin's celibacy as pickiness, not some problem that needs remedying.

I found a typo: end your celebatory phase. I'm pretty sure you mean celibate here.

[bunnysworld]

We all know he's just been waiting to meet Arthur ;) Glad you like it!

Thanks!