A Sour Saviour

[loopstagirl]

Author: Loopstagirl
Title: A Sour Saviour
Rating: R
Pairing/s: Merlin/Arthur, Arthur/Other
Character/s: Merlin, Arthur
Summary: He had been a fool breaking up with the man he loved.
Warnings: Dub-con, possibly attempted rape.
Word Count: 999
Prompt: Sour
Author's Notes:

Comments

[brunettepet]

Merlin taking charge and saving Arthur was a surprise and I like that Merlin isn't going to push. He made a terrible mistake and Arthur may not take him back but at least Merlin has an opportunity for closure now.

[loopstagirl]

Thank you so much!!

[clea2011]

Poor both of them, but Merlin got there in time and hopefully they can talk and get a second chance. I liked this a lot, particularly that you left the relationship unresolved rather than trying to tie it all back up too quickly and neatly at the end.

[loopstagirl]

Thank you! I wanted to try and keep it kinda believable rather than rushing through it all - and kind of hoping one of the other prompts is going to let me continue it!

[archaeologist_d]

I like how Merlin realizes that he made a terrible mistake. Now maybe he'll get a chance to fix it. Well done.

[loopstagirl]

Thank you so much - and I'm so sorry for the late response, just saw your comment here! Glad you liked it :)

[aeris444]

Oh, it changes to see Merlin as the one rescuing Arthur! I loved this! I'm looking forward to the next part!

[loopstagirl]

Okay this is weird - I've literally only just got the email notification now about your comment on here... Only two months late! Thank you so much for the gorgeous comment, means a lot!

[aeris444]

It's beacause I posted a comment today, thinking that I didn't commented on this but I deleted it when I saw that I already had. ;-)