In the Night

[mara93]

Author: mara93
Title: In the night
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Arthur,Guinevere
Summary: There is one kind of whisper, and then another…
Warnings: none
Word Count: 337
Prompt: Whispers in the Night
Author's Notes: Another wonderful prompt!

Comments

[neyah444]

Very beautiful and poetical. You described their love perfectly!

[mara93]

Oh thank you! The prompt and characters are so inspiring for me.

[yenny2206]

Well done hon.

After all, it is what marriage is about, at its most pinnacle point. Not the kinds of whispers kings and queens utter during the day of political necessities. But the kind they utter during the night, alone, under a volley of stars, outside with nature, a whispering of lips.

[mara93]

Thanks so much!

[ms_notebook]

Oh my gosh, this is beautifully written. The imagery and lush language just jumps out at me like stars. Speaking of stars, I just love the way you use stars in this drabble. Everything is surreal and magical, the way the night is their refuge, the only time that they can be themselves and really love each other, whisper their vows and truths, anything.

Such a poignant piece, I don't even know how to describe how much I liked it. It's gorgeous <3

[mara93]

Oh wow. Such kind lovely feedback again. I kind of love the stars so glad you liked them in this. And you conveyed beautifully exactly what I wanted to show.

Thank you so much!

[bluemagicrose]

Wow. Beautiful. Just beautiful.

[mara93]

Ah, thank you!

[fuckyeah]

Wonderful imagery like always! Those last lines say so much!

[mara93]

Ah, the lovely comment about the imagery makes me smile big. And yay, the last lines worked. Thanks!