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brunettepet January 15 2014, 00:16:01 UTC
Arthur considering his other toys and wanting to earn Merlin's trust shows he's changing just like his father did when he brought Ygraine home. I think Geoffrey's wish is already coming true.

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aeris444 January 19 2014, 16:11:04 UTC
Arthur is starting to see things differently but it will take time for him to overcome years of being raised with such ideas!

Though, I'm sure Merlin will help him! ;-)

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osky291 January 15 2014, 08:25:49 UTC
Oooh I like how you incorporated the prompt into this series, well done!

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aeris444 January 19 2014, 16:11:41 UTC
Thanks!

I really wanted to write more in this series so I've done what I could to incorporate the prompt!

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sallyna_smile January 16 2014, 09:47:45 UTC
Wow, the last bit was so touching *.*

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aeris444 January 19 2014, 16:12:43 UTC
It's the part I had in mind first!

I'm glad you liked it!

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amarie_authiel January 17 2014, 17:32:18 UTC
Yessss, another chapter of this! I am so worried about Merlin, I need to know more and fast!

Oh poor Merlin. And poor Hunnith. (I hope she'll come to the castle and stir things up a bit.)

I wonder what Arthur thinks will make Merlin forgive him and be happy about being kidnapped and locked up in a room, he doesn't even realize what he had done. At least he is slowly starting to question things.

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aeris444 January 19 2014, 16:13:54 UTC
Yeah, I've quite dropped this series in the past weeks but now I'm back with it!

Arthur is changing slowly but Merlin will not forgive him easily!

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clea2011 January 19 2014, 19:46:41 UTC
I think Geoffrey may well get his wish as Merlin is already changing Arthur and making him question the keeping of slaves, though he has a long way to go to make Merlin trust him. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.

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aeris444 January 19 2014, 19:48:54 UTC
I think so, too! ;-) With some patience, though!

Next part is being sent to my beta!

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