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Foolish heart

Sep 15, 2013 16:17

Author: aeris444
Title:Foolish heart
Rating:PG 13
Pairing/s:Arthur/Merlin
Character/s:Arthur, Merlin, Morgana
Summary:Will Arthur be foolish enough to follow his heart?
Warnings:Age difference
Word Count: 1388
Prompt:75. Foolish
Author's Notes: Thanks to derenai for the beta reading!

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c:merlin, pt 075:foolish, p:arthur/merlin, *c:aeris444, type:drabble, c:morgana, rating:pg-13, c:arthur

Comments 9

brunettepet September 15 2013, 14:53:27 UTC

You had me at Merlin in guyliner. I really liked the passage where Arthur was seeing their cosy, domestic future unfolding. I have a feeling it's going to play out just that way and when Merlin graduates and starts a career he and Arthur will get married and live happily ever after.

aeris444 September 15 2013, 19:17:37 UTC

the image of Merlin (or Colin) with eyeliner is just X____X

And I was really imagining the end like that!

osky291 September 16 2013, 01:17:17 UTC

I like Arthur's inner monologue and how he goes against the odds anyway. Nice work!

aeris444 September 16 2013, 12:51:19 UTC

Thank you!

candymacaron September 16 2013, 02:22:24 UTC

The tie in about their past was a nice addition. As was the visual of Morgana's goth party. I'm glad she helped push those two together. :)

aeris444 September 16 2013, 13:10:17 UTC

Thanks! I'm happy you liked it! And Morgana as a Goth is nealry canon! I love her black dresses in the last series!

archaeologist_d September 16 2013, 18:15:54 UTC

That was very cute. I liked how Arthur was already planning their future. :D

aeris444 September 16 2013, 18:48:00 UTC

Thank you! Of course they're destined to be together! ;)

clea2011 September 22 2013, 10:57:14 UTC

Awww, so lovely :D I like the way they both know they've had another lifetime together already.

And yum, Merlin in guyliner :D