Trial and error (Part 1)

Sep 07, 2013 17:29

Author: amarie-authiel
Title: Trial and error
Rating: PG-13?
Pairing/s:None
Character/s: Merlin, others not mentioned by name.
Summary: He asked to be beheaded so they built him a pyre.
Warnings: Um... see summary? Nothing graphic.
Word Count: 100
Prompt: #74 Warm
Author's Notes: Plotbunny, sit! Stay! She’s not a fluffy bunny, but very persistent so here ( Read more... )

*c:amarie_authiel, c:merlin, type:drabble, rating:pg-13, pt 074:warm

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Comments 17

47eleven September 8 2013, 12:16:21 UTC
Powerful imagery

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amarie_authiel September 8 2013, 14:45:59 UTC
*bows and scrapes* Thank you for commenting. :)

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osky291 September 8 2013, 15:40:13 UTC
Fire would never kill a dragonlord! Of course! I liked the trope. So many possibilities *scratches chin thoughtfully*

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amarie_authiel September 8 2013, 19:28:37 UTC
There is, isn't there? (Yes! Goal achieved!)
Do feel free to grab the ball and run with it.

Thank you for your lovely comment! :D

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witty_teacup September 8 2013, 16:10:06 UTC
I love how much meaning is packed into a simple 100 words. There is so much potential for this, and it's very strong, very powerful, and though but few words there is, there's a lot of imagery going on because nearly all is left to the mind.

I'm also loving the trope that fire cannot kill a dragon lord. Brilliant idea on that.

This is splendid, I love it all. Great work here!

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amarie_authiel September 8 2013, 19:36:37 UTC
Phew! I'd blush, but I am too glad to hear you say that. I was worried I was trying to squeeze too much into a too small space and that it wouldn't make sense to anyone but me.

Thank you! :D

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drarryisgreen September 9 2013, 18:48:59 UTC
THAT'S F--ING BEAUTIFUL.

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amarie_authiel September 9 2013, 20:22:09 UTC
I am looking at you like Arthur looks at Merlin in your userpic.

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archaeologist_d September 9 2013, 19:39:35 UTC
Loved how he knew if they burned him, he'd survive. Great job.

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amarie_authiel September 9 2013, 20:35:06 UTC
Thank you!
I think Merlin would be hopeful to the very last, but still plan for the worst.

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