If Wishes were....

Dec 14, 2021 15:22

Author: archaeologist_d
Title: If Wishes were…
Rating: G
Pairing/s: none
Character/s: Merlin
Summary: Merlin makes a wish list, casting a spell on it, hoping against hope that it would bring Arthur back from the dead.
Word Count: 449
Camelot_drabble Prompt: 485, Wishlist
Author's Notes: unbetaed,
Disclaimer: Merlin characters are the property of Shine and BBC. No ( Read more... )

*c:archaeologist_d, pt 485:wishlist, c:merlin, rating:g, type:drabble

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addie71 December 14 2021, 20:40:54 UTC
Oh, I love this! Merlin's grief was so heartbreaking until the wee bit of hope at the end. I hope he finds his wishes have come true when he reaches the lake.

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archaeologist_d December 14 2021, 21:03:05 UTC
Thanks so much. I've been writing a lot of fluff so I had to balance it with some angst. I think Merlin would grow more and more desperate as the years past.
Glad you liked it.

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gilli_ann December 14 2021, 20:52:01 UTC
If 'angst with a hopeful ending' was a term, this would fit that bill perfectly. I hope that lake visit isn't in vain.

You have such a way with words, D. "the stale air of centuries ground to dust", for instance - what evocative imagery!

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archaeologist_d December 14 2021, 21:04:49 UTC
Honestly, I thought of just leaving it without hope but I do love a hopeful ending. Thanks about the imagery. At one time, I thought about being a poet but that would take too much work! Still, my favorite author is Mary Stewart and her imagery is amazing.

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ajsrandom December 16 2021, 23:05:35 UTC
Oh wow, the angst is so real here! Really lovely work. :)

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archaeologist_d December 16 2021, 23:37:25 UTC
Thanks so much. So glad you liked it.

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