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From the Ashes

Jan 17, 2017 19:31

Author: eurydice72
Title: From the Ashes
Rating: PG13
Pairing: Arthur/Merlin
Summary: Even when Mother Nature has had enough, Merlin continues his hunt for Arthur.
Word Count: 1171
Prompt: #245, "enough"

( From the Ashes )

*c:eurydice72, pt 245:enough, c:merlin, type:drabble, p:arthur/merlin, rating:pg-13, c:arthur

Comments 6

schweet_heart January 18 2017, 03:54:12 UTC

This is lovely! The imagery of the disaster(s) is very vivid and I can feel how desperate Merlin is when finally he stumbles over Arthur. I have no doubt they'll be able to save the world as long as they're together :)

amarie_authiel January 18 2017, 08:27:53 UTC

Lovely! It's so like Merlin to give all he can give. Through all these years and all this agony, he is still a rock with a heart made of gold.

archaeologist_d January 18 2017, 17:16:02 UTC

That was great. Loved the description of all the destruction and what Merlin had to do to get back to Arthur in time. Well done.

aeris444 January 18 2017, 19:37:14 UTC

It's a really original idea! And their meeting was so simple. It really felt like destiny!

little_huntress January 19 2017, 02:39:27 UTC

This is absolutely beautiful, the imagery is vivid and haunting, and I could feel Merlin's desperation to keep going despite of the destruction and fear around him. And then his meeting with Arthur was so simple yet meaningful. <3